Wish Fulfillment

There seems to be a pattern emerging.  And it's hot.  This is sexy and longing and contains several parts that jolt the male senses awake.  You have a way with words and it shows here.

I must admit the first time I read this I didn't catch all the feeling and insinuation.  I must have been distracted.  But, upon a second read, there is a tenderness involved too which definitely ups the ante.  Your words are spectacular.

Perhaps the pattern emerging distracted you from seeing this piece as a work by itself. Perhaps I need to get my mind into a different frame so I don't bore my audience. :)
The tenderness is key, and I am happy to hear it accentuates the sexy.

"Perhaps the pattern emerging distracted you from seeing this piece as a work by itself. "

this exactly.  It just took distance but don't ruin the streak on my account.

If im not mistaken you are missing someone very badly....“hugs" i offer you condolences for your pain and adoration for your beautiful words

I love hugs! Thank you!
This is more a fantasy. My fantasies just happen to have emotion running all through them. I can see how it sounds like I am missing someone, especially coupled with the rest of my work lately.  
Thank you, my sweet.

I don't think you need capital letters at the start of every line simply because the lines are quite short, so it jolts. You could just put them at the start of each sentence. Otherwise this is a good erotic poem, filled with a sensual neediness which is somehow vulnerable and teasing at once. I'm reminded of what Homer Simpson tells country singer Lurleen Lumpkin after hearing her play a new song: "There isn't a man alive who won't be turned on by that." Critique is JMHO. Thanks for the read.

School me, Jack!  
I have beaten into me that you capitalize the beginning of every line. I think it would help the flow if I didn't. How do you know when not to?  
Vulnerable and teasing sums me up well.  
Thank you for your words and your time, Jack.  

I love the gentle blending of romance and sensuality. As a whisper vibrating against an eager heart's ear.

I have been told you can read it twice and get the sensuality once and the romance second.
Glad you found them blended together, as intended.
Thank you for the beautiful comment.  

This is "scented with romance"!! Great write, I enjoyed it Starlight

Seeing you always makes me smile, Doc.
Glad you enjoyed it. :)