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Party Tonight!
HOORAY!
My 1,500th poem!
I think I'll have everyone of you over for cake and punch
Then I'll pull out my revolver and blow my brains out
Each of you can fill your grab-bag with bits of my skull, brains and whatever else flies out of my head
Write a poem about the experience and post it on here or starsrite.
Peace to all you!
VOI
My 1,500th poem!
I think I'll have everyone of you over for cake and punch
Then I'll pull out my revolver and blow my brains out
Each of you can fill your grab-bag with bits of my skull, brains and whatever else flies out of my head
Write a poem about the experience and post it on here or starsrite.
Peace to all you!
VOI
Published 5th Apr 2025
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5th Apr 2025 9:13pm
you're not getting out of here that easy... Hello dearest Keith good afternoon I'll come have some cake with you 💕
6th Apr 2025 12:26pm
5th Apr 2025 11:48pm
i'm so going there to have some cake, and to make sure your revolver is empty.
6th Apr 2025 12:27pm
Shucks! Alright. If the gun is empty, I'll stay around till my 2,000th write.
What kind of cake do you like?
What kind of cake do you like?
6th Apr 2025 3:38pm
6th Apr 2025 5:35am
Not so fast buddy! We got to chew bubblegum and kick ass over at SR. Get your fucking head back in the game. After we have a slice of cake first. While you were distracted, Lilli, emptied your revolver. Vintage Keith, on this write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
6th Apr 2025 12:28pm
Damn! Lilli emptied the revolver. Maybe another time. Yes! We'll tear up starsrite Damian. Thanks for the comments.
What's your favorite type of cake?
What's your favorite type of cake?
7th Apr 2025 2:51am
7th Apr 2025 10:21am
6th Apr 2025 6:45pm
Congratzz in a big bloody insane way dear Keith;) not surprising you did this though:)
Btw i gotta sone big grab bags.. cannot go empty handed now:(
Btw i gotta sone big grab bags.. cannot go empty handed now:(
6th Apr 2025 6:48pm
You could bring your own grab-bag. Fill it up and leave with part of my skull. Peace out to you! Thanks for the witty reply.
6th Apr 2025 6:58pm
Na i dont need your skull or brain.. need you dear wholly.. the amazing adored poet n soul :) xx
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