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My Thoughts
Down in the dark depths of the earth
Down where hurt and despair lies
Torrential rain storms and earthquakes
Relentless fires in the skies
Where can I turn for comfort?
Who will help me in my despair
I help everyone with my brand of comfort
I always wonder if anyone cared
I close my eyes and breathe a breath of peace
I wake in a garden far off in the east
There is a lake and a woman whose beauty is rare
She calls to me in my time of despair
“Daughter, be still. You have a job to do
When it is over, you will drink from this lake of blue
No more worries or tears will be shed
Your sacred duty will be done, and you’ll rest your head.”
With this, I wake reformed and refreshed
To continue my mission till my last breath
I may feel more than I should
I will shoulder the weight; only I could
Down where hurt and despair lies
Torrential rain storms and earthquakes
Relentless fires in the skies
Where can I turn for comfort?
Who will help me in my despair
I help everyone with my brand of comfort
I always wonder if anyone cared
I close my eyes and breathe a breath of peace
I wake in a garden far off in the east
There is a lake and a woman whose beauty is rare
She calls to me in my time of despair
“Daughter, be still. You have a job to do
When it is over, you will drink from this lake of blue
No more worries or tears will be shed
Your sacred duty will be done, and you’ll rest your head.”
With this, I wake reformed and refreshed
To continue my mission till my last breath
I may feel more than I should
I will shoulder the weight; only I could
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This is a thought that took a life of its own.
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Re. My Thoughts
24th Mar 2025 3:29am
Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the list it belongs! This was an outstanding write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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24th Mar 2025 8:04pm
Sometimes we have to reach into the deepness of our spiritual subconsciousness of ourselves as it's is involved in creating our thoughts 🤔 that as powerful as the deepness of your own feelings this is written with provoking mind thoughts FOSHO INDEED 👍💪💯🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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24th Mar 2025 9:02pm
Respect Dear friend and POETESS and QUEEN 👑 for sure it's said that we are entitled to our own opinions on what we feel like like on the inside that of our heart and spiritual subconsciousness of our soul 🙏 STONEY 🏍️STONE RIDER 🏍️
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Re. My Thoughts
24th Mar 2025 8:13pm
It’s amazing that once you have a line or a title formed in your head, the muse just takes us the rest of the way through. Wonderful work.
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