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Failing in life

Their cars were motionless
Their home was drab
Their intensity was addiction
They once tried going to rehab
They failed miserably
Handling it with no care
Their appearance was frightful
Entering their house was extremely rare
Their sex was frustrating
Both were failing
He was dry & she was limp
Their health was ailing
Reality was a nightmare
Death surrounds their vision
The Grim Reaper is watching
Motionless people can create a collision
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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Author's Note
From this point forward I'll be submitting writes I have posted during my early days at DUP.
I call it: The Least Worst Of Vision_of_Insanity...enjoy.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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