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Better

When I first met you  
I didn’t know what to say  
You question everything I do  
To make me better  
That’s what you’d say  
I never knew there was someone    
Like you  
   
Now I do  
   
You told me who you were  
You told me how you really feel  
How torn up and hurt you were  
You let me in to reveal  
That I was the one to guide you to become  
Better than you were  
Better right now  
   
I didn’t want to hear you say those words    
I couldn’t be the one to let you down  
I did nothing to mend your hurt  
You were the one who rose off the ground  
To a better place  
That I am never bound  
Better than now
Written by fianaturie8 (Fia Naturie)
Published | Edited 19th Mar 2025
Author's Note
I tried one more time to write a song. This is it. It's not finished but that is all I have
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