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My Bones
"Sleep" hits me
deep in my core
brings me chills
and moves me
makes me tear
up surrender to
their poetic vibe
carried by their
lyrics & voices
i feel the ache
i need to sleep
it's been a week
afraid of what's
down there of
the hurt inside
and i can't hide
i need serenity
some quietness
the anxiety rises
i feel the hits in the
silence of my soul &
the marrow of my bones
deep in my core
brings me chills
and moves me
makes me tear
up surrender to
their poetic vibe
carried by their
lyrics & voices
i feel the ache
i need to sleep
it's been a week
afraid of what's
down there of
the hurt inside
and i can't hide
i need serenity
some quietness
the anxiety rises
i feel the hits in the
silence of my soul &
the marrow of my bones
Author's Note
Archive - Sleep (2025)
...The Archive Series...
https://youtu.be/YckoWgX1XQg
...The Archive Series...
https://youtu.be/YckoWgX1XQg
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Re. My Bones
15th Mar 2025 2:10pm
This series is one of the most revealing I've read here at DU. It's strikingly raw and realistically honest.
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Re: Re. My Bones
16th Mar 2025 11:34am
That's the most beautiful compliment I've ever received here. Thanks heaps for the smiles 💕
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Re. My Bones
15th Mar 2025 4:17pm
Outstanding write Duende. I love this series. Rock on my friend. xo
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16th Mar 2025 11:39am
Re. My Bones
15th Mar 2025 6:24pm
You're slender as an arrow, and just as piercing, with your writes. That makes you quite formidable ya know.
I'm thin too. But writing makes me muscular. So it should you, too.
Be a Godzilla! God knows I try! Lol
I'm thin too. But writing makes me muscular. So it should you, too.
Be a Godzilla! God knows I try! Lol
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Re: Re. My Bones
16th Mar 2025 11:46am
What a beautiful comparison :-) I'm tying to be a Godzilla, thanks heaps for your comment 🙏🏻
Re. My Bones
15th Mar 2025 8:17pm
Powerfully penned, Duende. Into the list it belongs! I felt every word of this, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. My Bones
16th Mar 2025 11:46am
Such kind words, my friend. Thanks heaps for your comment, the support and the RL :-)
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16th Mar 2025 12:00pm
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16th Mar 2025 12:08pm
Exactly that. That you felt this one is a huge compliment, thanks heaps for your visit and RL.