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You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
Can you scratch my back?
"Maybe. What's in it for me?"
Pimples, scabs and hair
"Maybe. What's in it for me?"
Pimples, scabs and hair
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- Edited 5th Apr 2025 2:45pm
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Re: Re. You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
3rd Mar 2025 10:41am
Re. You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
3rd Mar 2025 4:18am
This made me remember that my boyfriend in my 20's had pimples on his back. I had totally forgotten. It didn't bother me. I used to give him lots of back rubs.
Cute poem.
Cute poem.
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Re: Re. You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
Pimples and sharp nails aren't a good combination. It's like driving over broken glass with balloons as your tires. Something's gonna happen. Appreciate the comments. Thanks!
Re. You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
3rd Mar 2025 4:52am
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3rd Mar 2025 10:41am
Re. You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
3rd Mar 2025 10:24am
Lol .. was checking n zooming in the pic to fact check if its only pimples scabs hair .. but also others like lice .. n all the lies;)
minimalistic slapstick humour .. that i sure like in your poetry .. until it gets really bloody dark or a killer satirical ;)
Fine poetry dear Keith XO
minimalistic slapstick humour .. that i sure like in your poetry .. until it gets really bloody dark or a killer satirical ;)
Fine poetry dear Keith XO
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Re: Re. You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
3rd Mar 2025 10:43am
I'll dedicate a bloody dark killer piece just for you. Appreciate the kind words here. xo
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4th Mar 2025 6:44pm
Lol okies .. you wanna test my threshold;) will await that.. thanks Keith XO
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Re. You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
3rd Mar 2025 10:29am
Dear K,
This piece was a knee slapper. I enjoyed the quick wit and truth of it.
H🌷
This piece was a knee slapper. I enjoyed the quick wit and truth of it.
H🌷
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3rd Mar 2025 10:43am
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3rd Mar 2025 2:54pm
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3rd Mar 2025 2:59pm
Re. You scratch my back and I won't scratch yours
4th Mar 2025 3:06pm
Hahaha maybe give that person a day at the spa instead of scratching
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4th Mar 2025 3:12pm
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4th Mar 2025 3:20pm