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Make it a great day!
My visions tell no lies
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
someday were all going to die
until then open your heart
today's the day for you to start
no need to dwell in misery
smiles & laughter spells victory
be kind and appreciate others
as a child we listened to our mothers
only one shot we have to plant a seed
lend your hand to others that are in need
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Re. Make it a great day!
27th Feb 2025 1:56pm
Really needed to read this today! Thank you
for writing such a positive piece. It gives hope to those
not feeling so positive.
for writing such a positive piece. It gives hope to those
not feeling so positive.
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Re: Re. Make it a great day!
27th Feb 2025 2:07pm
Awesome! Happy to hear this poem helped. Always great to see & hear from you my friend. Stay well. xo
Re. Make it a great day!
27th Feb 2025 2:16pm
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27th Feb 2025 2:18pm
Re. Make it a great day!
27th Feb 2025 7:19pm
Each day each now .. when we fill fulfill like this what you say so lighted bright n full of selflessness n love .. we are truly living breathing .. Such profound truth n poetics dear Keith! Bows!!
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27th Feb 2025 8:18pm
Re. Make it a great day!
28th Feb 2025 3:33am
Dear K,
Great reminder. Even when it starts out rough there’s always something to be grateful about and share the positive. Lovely. H🌷
Great reminder. Even when it starts out rough there’s always something to be grateful about and share the positive. Lovely. H🌷
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Re: Re. Make it a great day!
28th Feb 2025 10:11am
Re. Make it a great day!
28th Feb 2025 3:42am
Beautifully penned, Keith. Into the list it belongs. Great message, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. Make it a great day!
28th Feb 2025 10:12am
A simple but refreshing message. Thanks Damian for the RL and comment.
Re. Make it a great day!
28th Feb 2025 10:00am
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Re. Make it a great day!
28th Feb 2025 10:52am
So loving the "visions" in your first line :-)
Thank you for sharing such an uplifting piece.
...& I'm writing this with a smile on my face...
Thank you for sharing such an uplifting piece.
...& I'm writing this with a smile on my face...
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Re: Re. Make it a great day!
28th Feb 2025 11:17am
Happy to know that you enjoyed this poem.Thank you Duende.
Peace & happiness to you
xo
Peace & happiness to you
xo