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frantic fuckin
soft glow of night
and their desires was very high,
two bodies were shy
but they ready to fly,
the moaning was started
when the hands started
groping and roaming,
lips started meeting each other
N their legs started
trembling in fervent atmosphere,
throat envelops the stiff tool
her tarty cheeks began to turn into pool,
the pumping begins,
and the boobs start to bounce,
the hardness began
to tear apart the softness,
two naked bodies started
melting in sweat
they felt so marvel
when the locked sweet love
began to flow with fragrance
and white flame...
and their desires was very high,
two bodies were shy
but they ready to fly,
the moaning was started
when the hands started
groping and roaming,
lips started meeting each other
N their legs started
trembling in fervent atmosphere,
throat envelops the stiff tool
her tarty cheeks began to turn into pool,
the pumping begins,
and the boobs start to bounce,
the hardness began
to tear apart the softness,
two naked bodies started
melting in sweat
they felt so marvel
when the locked sweet love
began to flow with fragrance
and white flame...
Published 25th Feb 2025
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25th Feb 2025 4:44pm
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Yesterday 7:33am
25th Feb 2025 5:55pm
“Flow with fragrance and white flame” my my you're quite the poetess… like I didn't realize that long ago hehehe 😊
Yesterday 7:37am
25th Feb 2025 6:03pm
Yesterday 7:37am
25th Feb 2025 6:29pm
It seems like you were watching porn when you wrote this, or remembering a love session you experienced. Either way, an enjoyable write.
Yesterday 7:40am
i always write about my experiences and sometimes my desires.... well you are right, also write porn, which has taken over my mind...
Yesterday 4:50pm
25th Feb 2025 6:37pm
Favourite lines (the first pair for rhyme, the second chunk for detail):
two bodies were shy
but they ready to fly,
and did they fly!
"N their legs started
trembling in fervent atmosphere,
throat envelops the stiff tool
her tarty cheeks began to turn into pool,
the pumping begins,
and the boobs start to bounce,
the hardness began
to tear apart the softness,
two naked bodies started
melting in sweat"
two bodies were shy
but they ready to fly,
and did they fly!
"N their legs started
trembling in fervent atmosphere,
throat envelops the stiff tool
her tarty cheeks began to turn into pool,
the pumping begins,
and the boobs start to bounce,
the hardness began
to tear apart the softness,
two naked bodies started
melting in sweat"
Yesterday 7:44am
25th Feb 2025 9:57pm
Really steamy morsels of poetry Lady, we like when you misbehave with your writing. Your romantic ones are great but that little mischievous piece here and there are like peppers in a dish. Tight
Yesterday 7:46am
If there is peppers or spices along with sweetness in the dish then the dish becomes delicious.. you know that ;)
25th Feb 2025 11:59pm
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Today 00:43am
Hot sex can either burn itself out or blaze like the sun. I prefer a sexual nuclear explosion myself.
Today 3:17am
of course, more than some gentle breeze and warm waves, I love having a blast. like someone's cum on my mouth...
