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It's 3am
It’s 3am
I’m watching video shorts
that make me think of you
of us
They fill my head with poetry
No, you fill my head with poetry
and my heart is pounding
bursting with something
I thought only existed
in the whirlpool
of a clever poet’s muse
I’m watching video shorts
that make me think of you
of us
They fill my head with poetry
No, you fill my head with poetry
and my heart is pounding
bursting with something
I thought only existed
in the whirlpool
of a clever poet’s muse
Published 18th Feb 2025
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18th Feb 2025 11:10am
Hello,
This is such a lovely scribe, its that instant where thoughts enter the mind, the tip of the veil thats lifted. You have described this moment well, I enjoyed reading this rippled thought that you pondered out through these lines. Greetings and blessings,
Rianne
This is such a lovely scribe, its that instant where thoughts enter the mind, the tip of the veil thats lifted. You have described this moment well, I enjoyed reading this rippled thought that you pondered out through these lines. Greetings and blessings,
Rianne
19th Feb 2025 6:37am
19th Feb 2025 6:49am
and yes, this one did indeed happen in a matter of seconds, in that moment and very hour.
Yesterday 3:58am
I agree with Anne-Ri999 this is a lovely write. trying to find the right words to say what your feeling
Yesterday 4:14am
Thanks Fia. Every once in a while it just just drips out of ya, no fussing around and endless editing.
