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Ring of life & death

He's showed his kid numerous times a video of him and the kid's mother fucking on the night the kid was conceived
He would then show the kid a video of the child's mother giving birth to him
Years later, the kid showed his kid a video of himself shooting his father in the head with a shotgun

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 9th Feb 2025

#birth #children #father #memories #sex

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Re. Ring of life & death

summultima (uma)

9th Feb 2025 10:25pm

this is abuse in highest form.. & the violence built in.. in the kill , seems justified

. Though feels .. the digital video if not present at all, nothing would have happened? lol, twisters minds are so anyways in any medium .

Though feels anger n embarrassed by the deviant- ness & abuse & violence .. your pen brings in black n white the pain of it all & the light needed to repair such .. without any loss - physically or mentally . Xx

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Vision_of_insanity

9th Feb 2025 11:27pm

That's right. The pain this kid was bottling up the whole time came out towards the end with a gun to his fathers head. People are fucked up!
Thanks for the comments.xox