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The pain that is love
Love is all around us
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
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Vision_of_insanity
Published 7th Feb 2025
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Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 11:27am
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7th Feb 2025 11:31am
Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 11:29am
Love is one of the most dangerous things in the poetic randomness of a crazy muse...
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Re: Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 11:31am
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It took me back to 1984 and the first moment I listened to Freddie Mercury's Love Kills. A love maniac boy of 21 YO.
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7th Feb 2025 11:40am
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7th Feb 2025 11:46am
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7th Feb 2025 11:46am
Like the song "Love Hurts" that was covered by Scottish Hard Rock band Nazareth in 1975.
Thanks LDF. Appreciate the RL.
Thanks LDF. Appreciate the RL.
Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 12:10pm
Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 12:52pm
Interesting take on love. Maybe if it's toxic love.
My ex husband bled me into a slow painful death.
My ex husband bled me into a slow painful death.
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Re: Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 1:27pm
Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 1:54pm
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7th Feb 2025 2:31pm
Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 2:26pm
hello dearest Keith this is really great with the analogy
some people are sadistic and enjoy toying with people
but they will get there's at least I hope so great write 💕
some people are sadistic and enjoy toying with people
but they will get there's at least I hope so great write 💕
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Re: Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 2:31pm
Re. The pain that is love
& without love, one is dead already;) juz me.. digging from your super correlating verses on love.. that slow torture is what is the lively pain kicking in energy n soul I feel ;) & death is a myth in love .. your epic minimal words inspire more Keith .. xx
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7th Feb 2025 5:15pm
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7th Feb 2025 5:17pm
Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 10:22pm
Brilliantly penned, Keith. Into the list it belongs. Dig this a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. The pain that is love
7th Feb 2025 10:27pm
Re. The pain that is love
10th Feb 2025 6:05pm
Oh yes love is pain especially when multiple people are competing for it. That's why I want to hide in a cabin in the woods with someone special lmao
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10th Feb 2025 9:07pm