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symphony of want
broken chords run thru my veins
skin electric with violent need
my body knows thirst
knows hunger
my hands know how to make music
how to make bodies tremble
relentless
precise
I fuck like I play
at a primal frequency
dominatin the rhythm
breakin boundaries til they shatter
each stroke a crescendo
buildin toward collapse
skin electric with violent need
my body knows thirst
knows hunger
my hands know how to make music
how to make bodies tremble
relentless
precise
I fuck like I play
at a primal frequency
dominatin the rhythm
breakin boundaries til they shatter
each stroke a crescendo
buildin toward collapse
Published 5th Feb 2025
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5th Feb 2025 8:28pm
you are a very talented writer I enjoyed this I also burn in an intense fashion 💕
5th Feb 2025 9:08pm
6th Feb 2025 4:50pm
Mm hmm.
I like this orchestra. Black tie with some dirt.
I agree with crimsin. You have talent. I’m looking forward to reading more.
I like this orchestra. Black tie with some dirt.
I agree with crimsin. You have talent. I’m looking forward to reading more.
6th Feb 2025 5:21pm
shouldn’t have posted the decent stuff first. gonna disappoint when the sloppy ones start gettin posted.
7th Feb 2025 1:30pm
7th Feb 2025 3:00pm
7th Feb 2025 1:11pm
This is the second piece of yours that has music that I have read, I am enjoying this.
7th Feb 2025 3:01pm
