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stir your soul
like lava bursting out of the ground
the choking feelings burst out
and flow out on virgin paper
then my soul gets relief
when a drop of dew falls on a bud
trembling in the cold wind,
the bud bears that gentle blow
and my soul gives magical peace to that bud through words
countless nests lying in the organic gardens
sad, empty and covered in dust
cry out for freedom
their silent screams ring in my ears
and their sobbing words shake my soul
insects moving in the yellow light
get crushed under someone's slippers
their lifeless bodies
and their futile attempts to live life
sets my unclothed soul aflame
my soul, frozen like ice in the body,
gets nourished by the warmth of red roses and music
then it smiles
and twinkles like a ruddy star...
Published 4th Feb 2025
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5th Feb 2025 2:57am
Your writing has taken on a next level. Truly poetic in every way. This is beautifully done, Dimpy. I admire how far you've come with your skill. This is awesome.
5th Feb 2025 4:03am
hello Styxian
your words made me very happy... thank you for honoring me so much with your words... i would say that i am still learning...
your words made me very happy... thank you for honoring me so much with your words... i would say that i am still learning...
