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journey journal...
these pages mark the passing of my life
the lessons & leanings
what I learn about myself
my sanctuary
where I tattoo all my pain in a flood of ink
in this ever growing volume of me
safe to express
without seeing judgment in...
...or rolling of...
...the witnessing eyes
& I wonder sometimes
what will become of these fragile chapters
my thoughts...my aches...my dreams...
when they're all that's left of me
will they read them & finally comprehend
who I really am
or would it be best...
...to simply burn the book
in the way of all truths...
...too painful to accept...
Written by
WillowsWhimsies
Published 2nd Feb 2025
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Re. journey journal...
2nd Feb 2025 3:16am
hello beautiful Willow you will be foever immortal and those seeing will know what a gorgeous soul you are 💕
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2nd Feb 2025 6:08pm
I have instructions in place for my writing to be destroyed when I'm gone. But I wonder sometimes if it's the right decision. Those who would benefit most from reading my words, my life, refuse to read them. Thus the instruction of destruction. I guess I had this thought that if they can't be bothered to get to know me in life, why would it matter in death? Thank you, Brenda, for your support & kind words
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2nd Feb 2025 11:31pm
that's too bad and I feel bad they don't treat you better...being that your words go over satelite here you will be immortalized as your words travel through time and space reaching who know you might just touch a lot of people you've never met hugs lovely lady 💕
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3rd Feb 2025 10:15pm
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2nd Feb 2025 3:36am
I relate to this. Will anyone truly know me after reading all of my journeys?
Spiritual or physically. Will it even matter?
If they are lucky, they do.
It takes a lot of thought, time, and insight to write IT all down.
Whatever journey we are currently on. We live and we write.
You are a blessing amiga:)
Truly.
Spiritual or physically. Will it even matter?
If they are lucky, they do.
It takes a lot of thought, time, and insight to write IT all down.
Whatever journey we are currently on. We live and we write.
You are a blessing amiga:)
Truly.
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2nd Feb 2025 6:10pm
We share ourselves in these verses...but we can never force anyone to read, to understand. Will they know me in my absence? Probably not. But not because I didn't give them the manual. That's the best we can do. Thank you, Adelphina
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2nd Feb 2025 3:39am
Willow my favorite lines "where I tattoo all my pain in a flood of ink, in this ever growing volume of me" Well written I like it
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2nd Feb 2025 6:10pm
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2nd Feb 2025 4:17am
"where I tattoo all my pain in a flood of ink" Love that line. Powerful write, Willow. Into the list it belongs. I connected with write, my friend. I ask myself those kinda questions often. Like this a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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2nd Feb 2025 6:12pm
As creatives, artists, writers, whether we intend to or not...& I do...we share our most naked selves with others. It's up to them to see it. Thank you, Damian
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2nd Feb 2025 7:11am
Dear W,
This has me contemplating my decision of burning my latest batch of writes. I’ve always thought anyone reading my stuff would just walk away more confused, I really appreciated your thoughts in this piece. This avenue is judgement free. It allows me to be me for those few precious moments. Wonderful write. H🌷
This has me contemplating my decision of burning my latest batch of writes. I’ve always thought anyone reading my stuff would just walk away more confused, I really appreciated your thoughts in this piece. This avenue is judgement free. It allows me to be me for those few precious moments. Wonderful write. H🌷
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2nd Feb 2025 6:14pm
I can't in all honesty say it's 100% judgment free here. I've been on the backlash side of it myself a time or 2. But the best we can do is free our thoughts & emotions & grow. Those who judge will need to look closely at why...it's not on us to make their truth clear. Only our own. Thank you, Honoria
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2nd Feb 2025 12:28pm
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2nd Feb 2025 2:16pm
Oh, how this piece resonates. These pages really show our journey through life. How we grow and evolve - how we fall and get back up. I see it as my legacy, as long as DUP exist my story is here. Having said that, I believe we can never fully know someone, their whole story, pain and struggles. Even though I'm getting to know myself better as years go by, I think I will never even fully know myself. Love this one, sis 💖
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2nd Feb 2025 6:15pm
Girl, as long as I exist...whether or not DUP does...you will be immortal. As will many others. I'm sure I'm not alone in saying you've deeply impacted my life & growth by your presence & your sharing, sis 💖
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3rd Feb 2025 6:20pm
Take the useful entries and burn the book
You can trim it down.
Burn the fat off the words.
But nothing is ever a waste
If you move forward.
Regards James
You can trim it down.
Burn the fat off the words.
But nothing is ever a waste
If you move forward.
Regards James
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3rd Feb 2025 10:17pm
I keep my writing to remind myself where I've been & how far I've come. What happens when I'm gone...probably somebody else's call. Thank you, James
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3rd Feb 2025 10:31pm
That's interesting
I keep writing in the hope I can redirect a person from a mistake, or help them see what they have always seen but forgotten. I would also like to be paid to write one day.
But I think that goes for a lot of writers.
I enjoyed your honesty
Kind Regards
James
I keep writing in the hope I can redirect a person from a mistake, or help them see what they have always seen but forgotten. I would also like to be paid to write one day.
But I think that goes for a lot of writers.
I enjoyed your honesty
Kind Regards
James
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6th Feb 2025 3:01am
Do not burn them. If nothing else, sneak them between pages of poetry books in the library.
Let someone be fascinated by the unexpected treasure.
It's kinda fitting, is it not?
Just write, and do not predict too soon. The ending is very far away. Your value to us is now.
Let someone be fascinated by the unexpected treasure.
It's kinda fitting, is it not?
Just write, and do not predict too soon. The ending is very far away. Your value to us is now.
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6th Feb 2025 10:29pm
That's the thing though, isn't it? We don't know when the ending is. All we can do is live enough to make it worth documenting...& reading. What will be...will be. Thank you, Styxian