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Me
I'm the kinda guy you can't deny
Through blue eyes I'll paint your sky
Yours sincerely, touch lit dark
Imps and fairies, makin' sparks
Pen and ink, I overthink
Smoke n' ice, one more drink
I keep it tight, shed some light
Mother fuck! Another write
Through blue eyes I'll paint your sky
Yours sincerely, touch lit dark
Imps and fairies, makin' sparks
Pen and ink, I overthink
Smoke n' ice, one more drink
I keep it tight, shed some light
Mother fuck! Another write
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Re. Me
Yesterday 11:27am
This was not light. It was short and had the imagination going places. Nicely done
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Yesterday 6:12pm
I love the buid to this poem and the power of your ending it was exciting ❤️
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Yesterday 8:31pm
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Yesterday 8:17pm
Love the "Through blue eyes I'll paint your skies" Loved all of it. Very clever.
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Yesterday 8:32pm
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Today 00:28am
Dear P,
Very enjoyable. This made me think of James Bond. Cool, reserved and gets the job done. 🤭
H🌷
Very enjoyable. This made me think of James Bond. Cool, reserved and gets the job done. 🤭
H🌷
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Today 9:31am
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Today 4:17am
Brilliantly penned, Pete. Into the list it goes. Love the flow on this, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Today 12:32pm
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Today 1:43pm
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Today 9:46pm
I'm not even sure where to start with this one. I love how it started out with swagger, danced through a bit of magic...& eventually landed on the eternal battle with the muse. Well done!
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Today 9:57pm