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Your Shelter
this is your poem
written with love
i see your story
feel your scars
i will start a fire
guide you home
& warm you up
ease your pain
tracing ley lines
of forsaken ink
read your dark
deserted pages
hold your fears
wipe away your
tears & trust me
i won't let you go
let me build you
a forever home
and make it our
own sacral place
if you wish to stay
come hide with me
i promise you are safe
written with love
i see your story
feel your scars
i will start a fire
guide you home
& warm you up
ease your pain
tracing ley lines
of forsaken ink
read your dark
deserted pages
hold your fears
wipe away your
tears & trust me
i won't let you go
let me build you
a forever home
and make it our
own sacral place
if you wish to stay
come hide with me
i promise you are safe
Author's Note
L Deer - Your Hand In Mine.
https://youtu.be/gdojBOgv4xk
https://youtu.be/gdojBOgv4xk
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Re. Your Shelter
23rd Jan 2025 2:59pm
Safety and comfort. That is what the majority of people are looking for. This is sweet, Duende:))
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23rd Jan 2025 3:08pm
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Re. Your Shelter
23rd Jan 2025 5:43pm
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Re. Your Shelter
23rd Jan 2025 9:07pm
You're gonna fill my reading list, aren't you? The compassion & support felt in this is so deeply empathic. We all need someone in our lives who brings this. So glad I have you in mine, sis 💖
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Re: Re. Your Shelter
24th Jan 2025 11:38am
Not intentional. We do need someone in our lives who brings this, so I decided to bring some. Glad you're in my life, offering love & support. Thanks heaps for your comment & RL, sis 💖
Re. Your Shelter
23rd Jan 2025 10:42pm
Beautiful write, Duende. Into the list it belongs. This was flawlessly executed, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. Your Shelter
24th Jan 2025 11:42am
Oh wow, flawlessly executed? That means a lot. Thanks heaps for your comment, continuous support and the reading list, my friend. I appreciate you :-)
Re. Your Shelter
23rd Jan 2025 11:09pm
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Re. Your Shelter
24th Jan 2025 2:56am
So perfect. It's not a complicated write either. It's a message we all need to receive in our lives, is we are fortunate! What a beauty of a write, Duende. I love it .
I like happy stuff! Lol
I like happy stuff! Lol
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Re: Re. Your Shelter
24th Jan 2025 11:53am
Beauty of a write is a huge compliment and yes, we all need this in our lives. Happy stuff is awesome :-) Thanks heaps for your comment & for taking her home with you, I appreciate it.
Re. Your Shelter
24th Jan 2025 3:32am
This is so perfect. Even the pic!
A beautiful poem sheltered under that fantastic picture!!
A beautiful poem sheltered under that fantastic picture!!
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Re: Re. Your Shelter
24th Jan 2025 11:53am
Such beautiful words, happy you love the pic. Thanks heaps for your comment & the RL :-)