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One fuck. Fantasy Challenge
I want him from the moment I see
him
Not even knowing his name
He smells so good
sandalwood and musk a hint of something I can't explain
It's intoxicating
We dance in this empty hotel room
No music on
Just us ripping our clothes off slowly
Making it last
His hands sliding up and down my arms
They Feel like heaven
The calluses leaving their mark as he trails his path
Kissing my neck whispering oh fuck in my ear
Leaning his forehead against mine
As he tries to take it slow
I don't want it slow
I want it all
I take him to the bed and I do get what I want
The pleasure was serial
Not knowing him made me do everything I ever wanted to do
Every word said
Every touch was a pure "fuck"
From an incredible one night stand
him
Not even knowing his name
He smells so good
sandalwood and musk a hint of something I can't explain
It's intoxicating
We dance in this empty hotel room
No music on
Just us ripping our clothes off slowly
Making it last
His hands sliding up and down my arms
They Feel like heaven
The calluses leaving their mark as he trails his path
Kissing my neck whispering oh fuck in my ear
Leaning his forehead against mine
As he tries to take it slow
I don't want it slow
I want it all
I take him to the bed and I do get what I want
The pleasure was serial
Not knowing him made me do everything I ever wanted to do
Every word said
Every touch was a pure "fuck"
From an incredible one night stand
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Re: One fuck. Fantasy Challenge
24th May 2012 2:27pm
NICE, IM GOING PUT MY PEACE, LIE A POEM TOO, ON MY LIBRARY, BUT YOUR, IS ONE TO WIN. NICE DONE.
I EVEN GOT DZ.
I EVEN GOT DZ.
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Re: One fuck. Fantasy Challenge
24th May 2012 6:30pm
You still have it beautiful dark haired lady. An unbridled passionate expression as only you can. From an intellectual and sensual perspective, this simply makes my body hot. This has got me hot, thirsty and longing for it to be me.....
.......great erotica without being nasty! (I taught you well) LOL
.......great erotica without being nasty! (I taught you well) LOL
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