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Rain
I ought to let everyone know
I'm no longer the rain
The annoying drip left on your window sill
That muddy puddle you avoid stepping in
Wouldn't want to ruin those jimmy choos on me
I refuse to hide the streaming tears
The clearing of pigeon poop on your car
No I'm no longer the rain
More like the arched morph of colors in the sky everyone calls a rainbow
I'm no longer the rain
The annoying drip left on your window sill
That muddy puddle you avoid stepping in
Wouldn't want to ruin those jimmy choos on me
I refuse to hide the streaming tears
The clearing of pigeon poop on your car
No I'm no longer the rain
More like the arched morph of colors in the sky everyone calls a rainbow
Published 4th Jun 2012
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2012 2:11am
Hey, GiGi, like those Jimmy Choos, and of course the end of that rainbow;) Great write!
4th Jun 2012 2:12am
A girl who knows fashion and writes like you. I'm in love. Be my BFF :) Ty very much
4th Jun 2012 2:14am
4th Jun 2012 2:19am
4th Jun 2012 2:16am
Gg I love the transformation in this poem from the puddle you avoid stepping in into a rainbow..beautiful self empowerment..peace Crim
4th Jun 2012 2:19am
4th Jun 2012 2:26am
Oh, I like this! I agree with Crim...the transformation from muddy puddle to rainbow is such a great metaphor! Good job!
4th Jun 2012 2:27am
4th Jun 2012 2:33am
Did you really feel like a mudpuddle G? Glad you are a rainbow now. Cool poem.
4th Jun 2012 2:35am
4th Jun 2012 2:37am
That was very touching, the truth in all the pain and misunderstanding. I truly liked this :)
4th Jun 2012 2:45am
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4th Jun 2012 4:22am
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9th Jun 2012 00:26am
I read it out loud, like I usually do to feel the depth and after reading it I smiled! I loved it!
9th Jun 2012 3:54am
13th Jan 2013 9:16am
13th Jan 2013 3:52pm
...that was rough as guts, but a very pretty idea, and that's all that matters anyway.
You better watch out or people are going to start calling you a poet...
H.
(and look how many comments it got...legendary my dear :-)
You better watch out or people are going to start calling you a poet...
H.
(and look how many comments it got...legendary my dear :-)
13th Jan 2013 3:53pm
