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unpack this one
...days that never
seem to arrive
...a past that never
wants to leave
life
sometimes it's as cold and
useless as a dead man's ass.
there
I've said it out
loud
...finally
Published 14th Jan 2025
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14th Jan 2025 2:57am
Dear BK,
Now this is a one of kind perspective that had me laughing out loud. H🌷
Now this is a one of kind perspective that had me laughing out loud. H🌷
14th Jan 2025 2:59am
Thank you, Honoria. Sometimes you just have to let it rip.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
14th Jan 2025 2:58am
Everything has a use,even a dead man's ass.....make a great bike stand.
It's a great minimalist piece.....thumbs up.
It's a great minimalist piece.....thumbs up.
14th Jan 2025 11:50am
Lol. Yes...a great bike stand. Didn't think of that.
Thank you, backdeckbenny.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, backdeckbenny.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
14th Jan 2025 8:28am
I think its been a while since I have seen a post by you but might be mistaken, As always I was in for a surprise while reading, especially in this one but the irony of it is a great metaphor!
14th Jan 2025 11:52am
Yes. It's been a while. I was reloading.
Thank you, Anne. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Anne. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
14th Jan 2025 11:52am
Yes. It's been a while. I was reloading.
Thank you, Anne. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Anne. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
14th Jan 2025 10:33am
Good thing my big white ass is cushy, it’s good landing material.
I almost fell over I laughed so freaking hard.
I love this, bk.
I almost fell over I laughed so freaking hard.
I love this, bk.
14th Jan 2025 11:54am
Hope it was a safe landing.
Thank you, Her. Deeply appreciated.
..
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, Her. Deeply appreciated.
..
hugs,
buddhakitty.
14th Jan 2025 1:44pm
I can certainly feel the desolation in this one, Kitts. And I don't believe there's anything wrong with feeling this way. On the contrary, those who never admit to feeling this way at certain times in life are fooling themselves. What matters is how we turn it around.
15th Jan 2025 2:55am
Thank you, Ahavati. I believe this emotional state can get your attention and launch one forward into a new direction in existence (if one pays attention to the message) .
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
25th Jan 2025 2:18pm
Hmm, it's like you've been the scout in this journey and are giving us the heads up because I can certainly feel the words on this.
Great work.
Great work.
25th Jan 2025 6:20pm
HEADS-UP!! WARNING WILL ROBINSON. DANGER. DANGER!!
Thank you, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you, wally.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
