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Sol

The morning sun took my shadow for a walk.
It flowed over concrete,cars and grass.
Sometimes playing hide and seek with much larger shadows or stopping when I stopped to greet a friend and chat to its own shadow buddy.
Most times it was by my side,a trusted friend.
Quite often though it would be up front hoping to get to the cafe first before the other shadows did.
Or it would be loitering behind me, a truculent toddler in search of its tantrum.
 
Everyone has shadows.
Some can't find the sun.
 
 
 
 
Written by backdeckbenny
Published | Edited 6th Jan 2025
Author's Note
I don't know where the thought came from but the first line was in my head whilst out walking this morning.
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