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White Butterflies
The snow was like miniature white butterflies
in a beautifully choreographed flutter.
Always vanishing too soon.
So we wish upon a cluster of winter stars,
that permeate the mental bars.
Beneath the glow of the ambiguous moon.
The despair of not knowing if another cherished
day will exist.
The very dark between stars is what despair
cannot resist.
The snow falls in a stark silent rapture
of every fallen dream the heart still yearns to capture.
The moon is the wolf's trusted guiding light.
While the rabbit's eyes were bright with fright.
Not all is seen as butterflies,
as we approach the path of our own demise.
in a beautifully choreographed flutter.
Always vanishing too soon.
So we wish upon a cluster of winter stars,
that permeate the mental bars.
Beneath the glow of the ambiguous moon.
The despair of not knowing if another cherished
day will exist.
The very dark between stars is what despair
cannot resist.
The snow falls in a stark silent rapture
of every fallen dream the heart still yearns to capture.
The moon is the wolf's trusted guiding light.
While the rabbit's eyes were bright with fright.
Not all is seen as butterflies,
as we approach the path of our own demise.
Written by
deliabear
(Debbie)
Published 5th Jan 2025
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Re. White Butterflies
5th Jan 2025 3:19pm
This is fantastic. The words, the image, the picture that I can see in my mind. Outstanding. Perfect for this time of year. Beautiful Debbie!
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5th Jan 2025 3:21pm
Thank you so much Keith for nomination. And for such nice comments.
Means a lot.
Means a lot.
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Re. White Butterflies
6th Jan 2025 4:41am
Beautifully penned, Debbie. Fantastic imagery, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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6th Jan 2025 12:14pm
Re. White Butterflies
6th Jan 2025 4:59am
This has a kind of yin and yang to it, especially at the end. Nice way to present the concept of balance. It's great how you can capture a myriad of emotion just from metaphor and visual imagination in nature, heh. The descriptions, especially the snow and butterflies, were good. Solid backbone and foundation, especially with the picture, and a good job of building upon it. Thanks for taking the time to share your inspiration.
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Re: Re. White Butterflies
6th Jan 2025 12:16pm
Hi! Nice to see you. Thank you so much for the nice review.
They always mean a lot to me.
They always mean a lot to me.
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10th Jan 2025 00:08am
Re. White Butterflies
11th Jan 2025 11:48am
"The snow was like miniature white butterflies" > what an amazing comparison.
The imagery in this one is mindblowing. You never cease to amaze me.
The imagery in this one is mindblowing. You never cease to amaze me.
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Re. White Butterflies
14th Jan 2025 11:04am
A poignant and evocative poem that explores the fragility of life, the beauty of nature, and the inevitability of mortality.
The imagery is stunning, with the snowflakes likened to "miniature white butterflies" in a delicate dance. The contrast between the beauty of the natural world and the darkness of despair is striking.
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The imagery is stunning, with the snowflakes likened to "miniature white butterflies" in a delicate dance. The contrast between the beauty of the natural world and the darkness of despair is striking.
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14th Jan 2025 11:10am
Thank you so very much for the nice comments. It is nature that lessens the despair.
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14th Jan 2025 11:12am
Re. White Butterflies
18th Jan 2025 1:18am
Killed it. Love this line, "Not all is seen as butterflies" as we refer back to the beginning when butterflies were mentioned.
LJ
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18th Jan 2025 1:25am
Thank you so much for reading & nice comments.
I wanted a link back to the beginning.
I wanted a link back to the beginning.
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