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Frozen
pathway halfway to Eden
strewn by photographs love sown
on tracks half hidden
by memories still so vibrant
hurts and scabs on hearts
picked clean to bleed again
if only to realise it hurts
just as much as when it begun
the year is almost over my dear
our seventh book completed
I pushed the wheelbarrow
and wrote the book
strewn by photographs love sown
on tracks half hidden
by memories still so vibrant
hurts and scabs on hearts
picked clean to bleed again
if only to realise it hurts
just as much as when it begun
the year is almost over my dear
our seventh book completed
I pushed the wheelbarrow
and wrote the book
Published 23rd Dec 2024
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The end of the year
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24th Dec 2024 7:58pm
Dear G,
I appreciated this poem as it reminded me that pushing myself, especially out of my comfort zone, yields the biggest rewards.
Congratulations on the success of completing your book. That is an awesome accomplishment. Lovely write. H🌷
I appreciated this poem as it reminded me that pushing myself, especially out of my comfort zone, yields the biggest rewards.
Congratulations on the success of completing your book. That is an awesome accomplishment. Lovely write. H🌷
25th Dec 2024 1:21am
Thank you dear H. For such a lovely comment. I appreciate you as always 🎄🎈🌹
26th Dec 2024 7:48pm
Nicely done Grace. Writing these chapters, capturing the moments of our lives is bound to leave a great legacy for all to read.
Well done.
Well done.
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8th Jan 2025 3:39pm
You have been sowing your love, passion for words, enlivening bonds .. high time you got your reward! Congratulations on your book dear Grace! And Happy New Year! God bless your beautiful soul..
