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Never love or hate
Focus
The truth of a blade
The truth of it sharpness
Steel can cut through flesh & bone
Never love or hate
The truth of a blade
The truth of it sharpness
Steel can cut through flesh & bone
Never love or hate
Published 21st Dec 2024
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22nd Dec 2024 4:30am
It's a fine line, and the cut is deep. Powerful write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
22nd Dec 2024 10:58am
the truth of an inanimate inhumane clinical blade.. yes of course it can never be loved or hated for it’s brutal barbaric power.. truth of a human heart with it’s divine soul is all that matters cos it knows feels handles anything in an appropriate treatment or flow.. like this knife or ghosts or gun or flower or breeze or love ::) just me inspired from your verses Keith. nice minimalist truths here xx
22nd Dec 2024 10:58am
