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a lucid haze
My bedsheets smell of
lavender and indica
silk pillowcase a cushioned ocean
for my restless mind
that floats through the dark
unseeing and unsleeping
I'm nowhere in particular
if I wait for the dawn I might see it
lavender and indica
silk pillowcase a cushioned ocean
for my restless mind
that floats through the dark
unseeing and unsleeping
I'm nowhere in particular
if I wait for the dawn I might see it
Published 15th Dec 2024
Author's Note
Written for the Incense of Insomnia comp
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15th Dec 2024 1:04am
19th Dec 2024 00:18am
15th Dec 2024 1:20am
hello beautiful Indie there are many days I just hang on waiting for the sun I hope it will get better for you ❤️
19th Dec 2024 00:19am
15th Dec 2024 5:36am
Dear I,
Killer closing stanza. Insomnia is such a drag. Your imagery of the scents and feel of this affliction are spot on. I wish you all the best for this comp. H🌷
Killer closing stanza. Insomnia is such a drag. Your imagery of the scents and feel of this affliction are spot on. I wish you all the best for this comp. H🌷
19th Dec 2024 00:20am
Thank you so much H, it was a good prompt, I've written about insomnia but they was something fun about incorporating in an extra sense.
15th Dec 2024 1:53pm
ah unseeing & unsleeping.. all these restless chaos you captured do well in contrast to the soft aromatic ambience afloat ..loved the title , apt. saw this in comp. , best to you xx
19th Dec 2024 00:20am
15th Dec 2024 4:01pm
A winner for sure, even without the comp.
Good luck, Indie
Holding you in thought, as always
Good luck, Indie
Holding you in thought, as always
19th Dec 2024 00:20am
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