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Evan Goes To See Mom
Evan goes to see Mom.
Even though naked, Mom's got tan lines.
Evan stripped and humped Mom.
Even though naked, Mom's got tan lines.
Evan stripped and humped Mom.
Published 14th Dec 2024
Author's Note
This latest wordku poem is about what is going on between a mature woman and a young man.
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14th Dec 2024 7:53am
Just one criticism, over these lines:
Even though naked, Mom's got tan lines.
Evan stripped and humped Mom.
If Mom was naked already that takes away need for someone else to strip her surely?
A rhyme came to mind over the picture:
O to see
gravity,
but won't deter
him humping her.
Even though naked, Mom's got tan lines.
Evan stripped and humped Mom.
If Mom was naked already that takes away need for someone else to strip her surely?
A rhyme came to mind over the picture:
O to see
gravity,
but won't deter
him humping her.
14th Dec 2024 2:06pm
