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hollow clouds of depression
my palms burned as soon as I touched the snow
my eyes were blinded by the moonlight
emotions were suppressed under the burden of misunderstanding
relationships caught fire due to the terror of the sun
my walls were lost in emptiness due to the flock of clouds
my dreams drowned in the river of night flowing in the sky
my sleep bloomed like a black lotus in the pillow filled with sadness
my eyes turned pink due to the embrace of depression
the dust of the entire city settled on my face that was clean for centuries
and when i looked out the window, the pale desert was full of fish...
my eyes were blinded by the moonlight
emotions were suppressed under the burden of misunderstanding
relationships caught fire due to the terror of the sun
my walls were lost in emptiness due to the flock of clouds
my dreams drowned in the river of night flowing in the sky
my sleep bloomed like a black lotus in the pillow filled with sadness
my eyes turned pink due to the embrace of depression
the dust of the entire city settled on my face that was clean for centuries
and when i looked out the window, the pale desert was full of fish...
Published 13th Dec 2024
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13th Dec 2024 10:16am
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13th Dec 2024 1:18pm
That's quite a poem and a surprise ending.
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You're writing is both mysterious and illuminating ...
Keep going
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Deep poetry dimpy
You're writing is both mysterious and illuminating ...
Keep going
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13th Dec 2024 1:30pm
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13th Dec 2024 6:31pm
Ends on a topsy-turvy note, showing how depression can distort:
the dust of the entire city settled on my face that was clean for centuries [and you're not yet even a century old]
and when i looked out the window, the pale desert was full of fish..[fish could not live in a desert].
the dust of the entire city settled on my face that was clean for centuries [and you're not yet even a century old]
and when i looked out the window, the pale desert was full of fish..[fish could not live in a desert].
14th Dec 2024 2:35am
hey, here it is written about depression, in which a person is experiencing all these feelings... N ya ya i know ss that fish survive only in water... and i too don't have to live for centuries... ha ha
14th Dec 2024 4:59am
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26th Dec 2024 1:12am
The sadness goes away with good new memories with your love ones. Keep on writing.
26th Dec 2024 10:37am
