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emerging (her face)
her face
comes
out of
my
dreaming
darkness,
emerging
into
the light,
features
i look
upon
earnestly,
i admire,
and then
before i
fully awaken,
her face
moves
back into
the
darkness,
while mine
emerges
into the
light.
comes
out of
my
dreaming
darkness,
emerging
into
the light,
features
i look
upon
earnestly,
i admire,
and then
before i
fully awaken,
her face
moves
back into
the
darkness,
while mine
emerges
into the
light.
Published 10th Dec 2024
Author's Note
i hope she doesn't mind that i was inspired by her picture when writing this
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- Edited Yesterday 1:51am
10th Dec 2024 6:58pm
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10th Dec 2024 7:34pm
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12th Dec 2024 2:20am
This has a very romantic feel. Nice words, Jimmy. You have certainly created an atmosphere with this write. 😊
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