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I'm Bananas
My Caribbean Queen
Oh such beauty
Thoughts unclean
Wild and fruity
Peel back slow
Your slender waist
Flesh on show
I want to taste
Ripe to eat
Leaving me mellow
Soft and sweet
Beautifully yellow
🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌
PUBLIC HEALTH WARNING!
Eat responsibly, and
Put the skin in the bin!
Oh such beauty
Thoughts unclean
Wild and fruity
Peel back slow
Your slender waist
Flesh on show
I want to taste
Ripe to eat
Leaving me mellow
Soft and sweet
Beautifully yellow
🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌🍌
PUBLIC HEALTH WARNING!
Eat responsibly, and
Put the skin in the bin!
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Re. I'm Bananas
8th Dec 2024 8:23am
Re. I'm Bananas
Anonymous
8th Dec 2024 8:27am
Once again...you nailed it!!!
Thx for the public health warning...
Hahaa..
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Thx for the public health warning...
Hahaa..
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Re. I'm Bananas
8th Dec 2024 11:56am
This is amazing, they should add a humor category to the categories.
I love bananas and I love your poem 🍌🍌🍌
I love bananas and I love your poem 🍌🍌🍌
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Re. I'm Bananas
8th Dec 2024 2:54pm
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8th Dec 2024 5:34pm
Re. I'm Bananas
9th Dec 2024 4:48am
Clever write, Pete. "My Caribbean Queen" made the Billy Ocean song enter my brain. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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9th Dec 2024 9:39am