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Smokescreen
Wild beasts surround a lonely soul
Corrupting them with broken promises
What they offer makes nothing whole
The world filled with doubting Thomas’s
Low hanging fruit another money grab
Indoctrinated into this hateful machine
It takes footwork to slip their subtle jab
Critical thinking reveals a smokescreen
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Corrupting them with broken promises
What they offer makes nothing whole
The world filled with doubting Thomas’s
Low hanging fruit another money grab
Indoctrinated into this hateful machine
It takes footwork to slip their subtle jab
Critical thinking reveals a smokescreen
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. I've said it before and I'll say it again, some humans need to work on critical thinking. So they don't find themselves in uncomfortable situations. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" You're a financial wizard, a top tycoon
Sweet lounge lizard with a silver spoon
You know you've never had it quite so good
And you didn't know that you even could."
- Lemmy Kilmister
- Damian DeadLove
" You're a financial wizard, a top tycoon
Sweet lounge lizard with a silver spoon
You know you've never had it quite so good
And you didn't know that you even could."
- Lemmy Kilmister
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Re. Smokescreen
8th Dec 2024 6:55am
Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:01am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, MS. I loved that line, I always have a line or two in each write I truly love. Maybe it's just me. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Smokescreen
Anonymous
8th Dec 2024 7:54am
'' It takes footwork to slip their subtle jab
Critical thinking reveals a smokescreen''
...always on your pivot
much respect
Naaj
Critical thinking reveals a smokescreen''
...always on your pivot
much respect
Naaj
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Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:03am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. Loved that combo myself. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Smokescreen
8th Dec 2024 9:42am
Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:04am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, SHAMAN. Much respect, brother poet. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 11:24am
As I appreciate you for sharing your thoughts ✌️🙏my poetry brother a poet✍️💯
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Re. Smokescreen
8th Dec 2024 9:45am
Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:07am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. I loved that line as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Smokescreen
8th Dec 2024 11:38am
Another epic piece from your pen, my friend. The "broken promises" and "doubting Thomas’s" remind me of Judas by Depeche Mode. And I really really hope you don't find this offense - I think in music (can't help it) I appreciate you.
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Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:11am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. I'm glad you enjoyed the write. "Personal Jesus" is my favorite, no offense taken. Although I love, Johnny Cash's cover of it as well. I think in music as well my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 11:04am
You're so very welcome. Personal Jesus is an amazing song and I'm happy to hear you like Depeche Mode too, my friend :-)
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Re. Smokescreen
8th Dec 2024 11:50am
Much truth here. I love the ghostly smoke image, fits the piece perfectly.
Appreciate you, awesome job.
Appreciate you, awesome job.
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Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:13am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Debbie. I'm glad you enjoyed this write, and the image that accompanied it. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Smokescreen
8th Dec 2024 12:41pm
Indeed, Damian. But I'm sure all those millionaires on Trump's cabinet are concerned with the price of eggs and gas!
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9th Dec 2024 5:16am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tams. I'm sure it's eggs and gas prices they're worried about. Surely it wouldn't be the cash grab opportunity. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:18am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. 100% agree with you my friend. Glad you liked the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Smokescreen
8th Dec 2024 2:52pm
Footwork doesn't even need to be fancy, dors it? Just fluid...adaptable. I love how I sit down with my morning coffee & you hit me with a mind mover first thing. Always highlighting cracks in the wall that need tending. You are a much appreciated motivator, Damian
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9th Dec 2024 5:21am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. Not fancy at all, just need some critical thinking. So glad you enjoyed the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Smokescreen
8th Dec 2024 8:15pm
speaks much of the corruptive political minded world we are in.. adding fuel are the lopsidedness of capitalistic consumeristic & so much soul~ eating -isms that makes their self soul selling at ease in their slavish making ways..
but yep, that lonely soul you say ..is a tempered truthful one that aligns n thinks critical tearing these smokescreens i hope.. & that lonely soul never is a lonely soul inspite of these trickery jackal-isms, as that soul in sync with suchmore souls & cosmos, never fades unto this smokescreen:)
hope you dunn mind my wordistic rush in here, jus me from your thoughtful poetic package of neat natural verses you flow, with images & notes & quotes .. superb & thanks dear poet xx
but yep, that lonely soul you say ..is a tempered truthful one that aligns n thinks critical tearing these smokescreens i hope.. & that lonely soul never is a lonely soul inspite of these trickery jackal-isms, as that soul in sync with suchmore souls & cosmos, never fades unto this smokescreen:)
hope you dunn mind my wordistic rush in here, jus me from your thoughtful poetic package of neat natural verses you flow, with images & notes & quotes .. superb & thanks dear poet xx
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Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:23am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Uma. I'm glad you connected with this write. I totally agree with you. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re: Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 5:25am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. Glad you liked the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 11:59am
Just read a headline this morning that one of the first things on the new administration's agenda is to change how American elections are conducted. I fear it's too late for some to wake up. Appreciate your insights, Damian.
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Re: Re. Smokescreen
10th Dec 2024 3:18am
It's madness for sure, anything is possible with the new administration. I agree with you totally, Tams. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Smokescreen
9th Dec 2024 9:43pm
Re: Re. Smokescreen
10th Dec 2024 3:19am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian