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JUST TAKE IT OFF!
(Julie and Marvin)
Walk in front of me, Julie said.
Excuse me?
Yeah, you heard what I said. Walk in front of me and take your clothes off.
Hold on, no.
Are you nervous? I've seen you without your clothes on before.
You want me to take my clothes off while you sit there and eat popcorn?
Yes.
No.
Come on, you're more entertaining than what's on TV.
I just came home from work. I want to take my shirt and pants off and shower.
Babe I'm asking you to do just that; just let me watch.
Is it that time?
It's always that time!
Are you horny at this moment?
Dang, you ask a lot of questions. Just take it off.
See I have an issue with this whole situation because I am the man, and you are the woman. I am supposed to watch you.
That’s not how I see it. I am in your place. You are supposed to entice me to want to take everything off and have you deep, deep inside.
I’m not up for this.
I bought the rope.
Wait, you got it?
I will tie that body so tight that your only concern will be how to make it go down. Now, take it off slowly.
Slowly unbuttoning his shirt, Julie's mouth was getting a bit dry, and more skin was revealed. Taking a sip of her drink, Marvin stopped and stared at her in disbelief.
It is one thing to undress in front of you this way, but to slurp up your drink like that. Nope, I'm going to the shower. Keep the rope.
Walk in front of me, Julie said.
Excuse me?
Yeah, you heard what I said. Walk in front of me and take your clothes off.
Hold on, no.
Are you nervous? I've seen you without your clothes on before.
You want me to take my clothes off while you sit there and eat popcorn?
Yes.
No.
Come on, you're more entertaining than what's on TV.
I just came home from work. I want to take my shirt and pants off and shower.
Babe I'm asking you to do just that; just let me watch.
Is it that time?
It's always that time!
Are you horny at this moment?
Dang, you ask a lot of questions. Just take it off.
See I have an issue with this whole situation because I am the man, and you are the woman. I am supposed to watch you.
That’s not how I see it. I am in your place. You are supposed to entice me to want to take everything off and have you deep, deep inside.
I’m not up for this.
I bought the rope.
Wait, you got it?
I will tie that body so tight that your only concern will be how to make it go down. Now, take it off slowly.
Slowly unbuttoning his shirt, Julie's mouth was getting a bit dry, and more skin was revealed. Taking a sip of her drink, Marvin stopped and stared at her in disbelief.
It is one thing to undress in front of you this way, but to slurp up your drink like that. Nope, I'm going to the shower. Keep the rope.
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 8th Dec 2024
| Edited 16th Dec 2024
Author's Note
This was another I was not going to put a note. But why not. Women love to watch and you do not have to dance, just relax in your body.
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Re. Better than T.V.
8th Dec 2024 1:50am
What a bore he is, lol! Mind you, I could imagine that might be my reaction sometime down the line too, lol.😖
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Re. JUST TAKE IT OFF!
8th Dec 2024 3:36am
Hot write, Fia. You've got your own style, and it always makes for a great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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8th Dec 2024 4:12am
This is so desiring and demanding. Loved it! Watching your partner in skin is bliss . This is so demanding , ine would follow the command. 😍 Well, I haven't encountered such a demanding partner yet 🙈
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8th Dec 2024 4:16am
Re. JUST TAKE IT OFF!
I would follow such a command in similar intimate circumstances without arguing (although for some couples the arguing can be part of the fun), who knows she might end up joining you in that shower!. Put rhymingly:
When she's horny
she wants to see...
No arguing,
you're just stalling,
so don't say No,
let your clothes go!
Feel the effect
when you connect!
When she's horny
she wants to see...
No arguing,
you're just stalling,
so don't say No,
let your clothes go!
Feel the effect
when you connect!
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8th Dec 2024 2:58pm
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8th Dec 2024 9:48am
They would be off Fia as quick as you could say get them off, not my socks though 😂❤️
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8th Dec 2024 4:00pm
Great advice for my upcoming docu-series about taking off my clothes!
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20th Dec 2024 3:38am
I loved it. Why should a guy have control exclusively? Why would a guy say no unless he just got some elsewhere? Or did he feel emasculated?
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20th Dec 2024 3:45am
Thank you. I like reversing roles. Now I did not think on the no concept.. Why would he say no?
Re. JUST TAKE IT OFF!
20th Dec 2024 4:01am
He might resist because there were signs he just did another girl. He has to shower off the scent of sex. A guy can tell from having kissed his wife/girlfriend after a BJ that if she comes home horny and sits on his face and he tastes what she did. It's a nice piece of writing. Are there others with those characters? Have you thought to continue their story? Maybe they both have some guilt?
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20th Dec 2024 4:15am
I wrote Mr M efer not leaving me and Not ready. Not the same characters but gives off that vibe I think. I will Dm you