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Achromatic
There's abandonment in an all day rain
when humans surrender to the grey skies
and sit to listen to the gutters drain
and juncos by birdbath freely baptize
with waddle-some mourning doves attending
and squirrels contributing drenched fur grey
for a somber wild kingdom blending
of rodent fleece and bird feather display
and raindrops hanging to refract the air,
sullenly, and to showcase maple bark,
now winter bare for its grey to compare
the melancholy monotones so stark
that when the crows announce their arrival
I think it all a gothic revival.
when humans surrender to the grey skies
and sit to listen to the gutters drain
and juncos by birdbath freely baptize
with waddle-some mourning doves attending
and squirrels contributing drenched fur grey
for a somber wild kingdom blending
of rodent fleece and bird feather display
and raindrops hanging to refract the air,
sullenly, and to showcase maple bark,
now winter bare for its grey to compare
the melancholy monotones so stark
that when the crows announce their arrival
I think it all a gothic revival.
Written by
MidnightSonneteer
Published 7th Dec 2024
| Edited 8th Dec 2024
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Re. Achromatic
8th Dec 2024 3:18am
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8th Dec 2024 4:14am
Re. Achromatic
8th Dec 2024 3:47am
Beautiful write, MS. Love the storytelling here. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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8th Dec 2024 4:18am
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8th Dec 2024 5:51am
We tend to open our windows when it's raining (if it's not windy) to let refresh the house (even if it's cold). The sound can be so soothing.
Nice work.
Nice work.
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8th Dec 2024 6:47am
Me too. I will open windows for fresh air anywhere over about 55 degrees.
Re. Achromatic
8th Dec 2024 12:44pm
I LOVE when a murder of crows lands in my yard! There are some days it's a cacophony outside with all the species!
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Re. Achromatic
8th Dec 2024 7:40pm
your nonstop verses intensifying the greyness eve more in all forms & moods & airs & skies & .. to such that even morphs the reader in one & all towards it in mergence.. beautifully done & as I always feel, there’s more art n beauty in melancholic cuckooing in tones & tunes, than any explicit flashing screaming hues.. love this scribe Poet xx
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8th Dec 2024 11:14pm
I'm very glad you liked it.🩵
I find that sky watching is endlessly enchanting ☔⛅⛈️
I find that sky watching is endlessly enchanting ☔⛅⛈️
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9th Dec 2024 2:15am
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9th Dec 2024 2:28am
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9th Dec 2024 2:31am
Man, I'm as busy as a Viagra dealer in a nursing home.
Thanks. Miss all y'all on days I have time for coherent thought.
Thanks. Miss all y'all on days I have time for coherent thought.
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LOL
Coherency is always at a premium, ain't it?
No wonder you're in such high demand:)
Coherency is always at a premium, ain't it?
No wonder you're in such high demand:)
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9th Dec 2024 9:50pm
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