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Their Beginning
Beginnings
Styxian
I woke up this mornin’
And I did not know what to expect
The sun was shinin’
The sky was blue
But in my heart something is comin’
Just did not know what yet
Adelphina
I am inspired and the words
Will not be contained.
DUP here I come
I will bleed for you all the joy and the pain
Styxian
What did I just read?
Did she just strike a match?
A poem about yellow jackets
I have to comment.
Something clever
Let me think on that
Adelphina
I never knew he was as passionate in his writes
Dreams made me see him in a different light
I’m going to comment and let’s see
If he can withstand me,
Adelphina. Or will he pass by?
Styxian
Did I just say, ”Thanks Pal?"
Worse yet ended off with “Nice Blouse”
Oh my lord I need to crawl under my house
Adelphina
Well he has promise
And a little spunk.
Mentioning my blouse
He’ll have the DUP on high alert
Wonder what he would have said if I told him
I was wearing a skirt?!
Styxian
I woke up this mornin’
And I did not know what to expect
The sun was shinin’
The sky was blue
But in my heart something is comin’
Just did not know what yet
Adelphina
I am inspired and the words
Will not be contained.
DUP here I come
I will bleed for you all the joy and the pain
Styxian
What did I just read?
Did she just strike a match?
A poem about yellow jackets
I have to comment.
Something clever
Let me think on that
Adelphina
I never knew he was as passionate in his writes
Dreams made me see him in a different light
I’m going to comment and let’s see
If he can withstand me,
Adelphina. Or will he pass by?
Styxian
Did I just say, ”Thanks Pal?"
Worse yet ended off with “Nice Blouse”
Oh my lord I need to crawl under my house
Adelphina
Well he has promise
And a little spunk.
Mentioning my blouse
He’ll have the DUP on high alert
Wonder what he would have said if I told him
I was wearing a skirt?!
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 30th Nov 2024
| Edited 1st Dec 2024
Author's Note
As we all know how these two love birds story is going to end. Love beginnings
Hope you two like it
Hope you two like it
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30th Nov 2024 10:38pm
Re. Their Begining
30th Nov 2024 10:37pm
Well I just changed my profile pic to suit your write. Lol.
And you got the details down pretty damn accurate! What a wonderful early Xmas gift. Dare i say you made me feel a bit giddy over it?! Lol.
I had no idea that her and I would ever become a couple, much less even meet! But here we are. And I'm flying to Texas in a few days, and then she's here in January. We need to be together permanently just to save on all the plane tickets, etc. Lol.
I'm a better person with her in my life. And obviously happier.
So thank you for showing me how the progression got us here.
By the way, there is no "end". Every day is still part of the beginning.
And you got the details down pretty damn accurate! What a wonderful early Xmas gift. Dare i say you made me feel a bit giddy over it?! Lol.
I had no idea that her and I would ever become a couple, much less even meet! But here we are. And I'm flying to Texas in a few days, and then she's here in January. We need to be together permanently just to save on all the plane tickets, etc. Lol.
I'm a better person with her in my life. And obviously happier.
So thank you for showing me how the progression got us here.
By the way, there is no "end". Every day is still part of the beginning.
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Re: Re. Their Begining
30th Nov 2024 10:42pm
You know you two are the DUP couple. lol
And that last sentence is having all the females here saying "aww"
and the men say," We can't compete with that statement." lol
All jokes aside, you two were meant to be my friend
And that last sentence is having all the females here saying "aww"
and the men say," We can't compete with that statement." lol
All jokes aside, you two were meant to be my friend
Re. Their Begining
30th Nov 2024 11:06pm
I don't wish for others to compete with it, just hopefully duplicate it in their lives.
To be brave enough to step away from insecurity (we all have it) and answer the urge to find someone to connect with inside out. God knows I have flaws, she accepts them.
Writing is like a super hero cape. We literally can make ourselves a better person, over time, by our writing about "good traits" subjects. We live our words.
And, people are attracted to what is truly good.
Okay okay, I'm stopping. Lol.
To be brave enough to step away from insecurity (we all have it) and answer the urge to find someone to connect with inside out. God knows I have flaws, she accepts them.
Writing is like a super hero cape. We literally can make ourselves a better person, over time, by our writing about "good traits" subjects. We live our words.
And, people are attracted to what is truly good.
Okay okay, I'm stopping. Lol.
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Re. Their Begining
30th Nov 2024 11:15pm
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30th Nov 2024 11:18pm
Re. Their Begining
Hi Fia!!
This write is such a gift. Thank you so much for it. I smiled the whole time
while reading it. I just got off video chat with him and he told me about the write.
You gave him such a smile and now I have it!!
You just never know who you will meet on a daily basis.
I feel very fortunate to have met you. You are a great human with such
an open heart. Thank you for sharing it with everyone here:)
This write is such a gift. Thank you so much for it. I smiled the whole time
while reading it. I just got off video chat with him and he told me about the write.
You gave him such a smile and now I have it!!
You just never know who you will meet on a daily basis.
I feel very fortunate to have met you. You are a great human with such
an open heart. Thank you for sharing it with everyone here:)
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Re: Re. Their Begining
1st Dec 2024 00:32am
Thank you for saying that. There is so much amazing talent and people here.
You two just pulled me in, and I am happy to know you both.;))
You two just pulled me in, and I am happy to know you both.;))
Re. Their Begining
1st Dec 2024 2:38am
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1st Dec 2024 2:43am
Re. Their Begining
1st Dec 2024 3:03am
Brilliantly written, Fia. I would put it in the list, but I don't have one at the moment. I'll be back to put it in my list where it belongs. I did not know the whole story. lol. I was tardy to the party. Great storytelling, and love your wit in this write. Made me smile and chuckle a little. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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1st Dec 2024 3:07am
Re. Their Begining
1st Dec 2024 12:50pm
This is simply epic - you brought huge smiles this morning :-)
It's an amazing couple, our two little love birds 💕 Great piece, Fia.
It's an amazing couple, our two little love birds 💕 Great piece, Fia.
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Re: Re. Their Begining
1st Dec 2024 3:52pm
Re. Their Begining
1st Dec 2024 1:59pm
Dear F,
Charming write. I enjoyed this from start to finish. A lovely homage to two lovely people. Super sweet. H🌷
Charming write. I enjoyed this from start to finish. A lovely homage to two lovely people. Super sweet. H🌷
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1st Dec 2024 3:52pm
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2024 2:31pm
You’re a treasure, girl.
So glad you’re here. This is beautiful.
So glad you’re here. This is beautiful.
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1st Dec 2024 3:53pm
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Re. Their Begining
1st Dec 2024 4:32pm
I used to call Adel “Hot Sauce” but I stopped doing that once I knew they were a couple.
BIG LIKE
BIG LIKE
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