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Fête
Jam and scones
Strawberry creams
Sunny skies
Lavender dreams
The lawn a carpet
Buttercup feet
Flowers in bloom
Smell so sweet
Stalls set up
Village fête
Burnt charcoal
Paper plate
Dad's and beers
Mom's straw hat
Father Mark
Stops for a chat
Girls and boys
Dance in the sun
Bales of hay
The days been fun
Strawberry creams
Sunny skies
Lavender dreams
The lawn a carpet
Buttercup feet
Flowers in bloom
Smell so sweet
Stalls set up
Village fête
Burnt charcoal
Paper plate
Dad's and beers
Mom's straw hat
Father Mark
Stops for a chat
Girls and boys
Dance in the sun
Bales of hay
The days been fun
Published 25th Nov 2024
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25th Nov 2024 9:31am
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25th Nov 2024 1:31pm
This is delicious. I love that you can pack so much vibrant whimsy into small lines.
25th Nov 2024 2:09pm
26th Nov 2024 6:56pm
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27th Nov 2024 2:08pm
Great. Feels like another era. That sense of safety and contentment has, unfortunately gone, I think.
27th Nov 2024 3:53pm
29th Nov 2024 10:05pm
Don't know how I missed this Pete. This was a nice Sunday morning feel piece
29th Nov 2024 10:28pm
