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Cracks on the Sidewalk
my love you dwell in the garden of my heart
you hold me in your arms so tight
warmth of your heart love burning bright
as blooms in the morning light
my love your laughter is like a balm
a poultice on past wounds
leading me to a peaceful calm
saving me before I drown
if there are cracks
on the sidewalk of our life
we make sure our hearts' intact
wrapped within our internal light
you are my symphony of dreams
with every words we weave
every note of music danced to
its a vow to never give up
you hold me in your arms so tight
warmth of your heart love burning bright
as blooms in the morning light
my love your laughter is like a balm
a poultice on past wounds
leading me to a peaceful calm
saving me before I drown
if there are cracks
on the sidewalk of our life
we make sure our hearts' intact
wrapped within our internal light
you are my symphony of dreams
with every words we weave
every note of music danced to
its a vow to never give up
Published 22nd Nov 2024
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Inspired by a competition
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22nd Nov 2024 7:10pm
Dear G,
A poem within a prayer. Your soft gentle style of writing love is beautiful.
H🌷
A poem within a prayer. Your soft gentle style of writing love is beautiful.
H🌷
22nd Nov 2024 7:48pm
Dear H, thank you so much for reading and the kind comments. I wrote this for a competition but didn't seem gel ...glad you like it. 🌹
22nd Nov 2024 11:49pm
23rd Nov 2024 00:27am
23rd Nov 2024 8:37pm
"we make sure our hearts' intact
wrapped within our internal light" ! So beautiful what you have written from your loving heart and poetic mind, my dear Grace! Your heart is filled with Love and Light and your adept quill is rendering such Beauty! An immense pleasure reading you! God bless you.
wrapped within our internal light" ! So beautiful what you have written from your loving heart and poetic mind, my dear Grace! Your heart is filled with Love and Light and your adept quill is rendering such Beauty! An immense pleasure reading you! God bless you.
23rd Nov 2024 10:49pm
Thank you so much dear Besma for your kind comments. Comments like yours are my great source of encouragement, 🌹
5th Dec 2024 3:50am
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