Kiss of Ambrosia

i can the feel passion you feel for her...:) and it's beautiful...thanks for the poem

Thank you for the comment Philip :) Much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed.

Wonderful  masterpiece

Thank you very much Jaito :)

Beautifully written and so sensual.

Thank you so much Magdalena. :)

There's a real sense of excitement and passion in this which is a powerful combination. Just te right length as well.

Thank you very much Benny for your comment. Glad you enjoyed this. I really wanted to keep this one from being an epic. Glad the length works and conveys those emotions aptly x)

Miss Indie

Nectar of the gods sprinkled
with naked abandon here.:)

Exhilirating and exciting at the
same time, this was a very unique
experience.

Respect,

Sumeet

Thank you Sumeet :)

wow this is really great. 'arching blue beneath my skin' gave me such an awesome mental image. but i thought maybe 'skin' should be changed in L2, just because it's a really short poem and the words are weighted and skin appears at the end of a line twice. maybe 'flesh' would work. but that's just me nitpicking. :]

thanks so much for your comment aglitch, much appreciated. Despite being such a short poem I didn't even realise I'd used skin as an end word twice, thanks for bringing that to my attention. I don't think flesh is the right word for what I am going for but I'll have a think and see how I can fix it. Glad you enjoyed x)