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Submissives Confession
Confess to me
In this space of secrecy
What you tell me will be between you and me
Make it a true confession
In the end, you will be taught a lesson
Bless me, Mistress for I have sinned.
You started out perfect; continue, begin.
I have thoughts
Wants
Desires
impurity it's going to throw me in the fire
You'll burn with what I give you tonight
kneel before me
enjoy my bite
Before we begin, I deserve a token
open my robe and lean in
place a kiss for words that were spoken
You did that so beautifully
The strap that I picked out is more for me
than you, you see
count it out, and when we're done
I will allow absolution to come
ONE
In this space of secrecy
What you tell me will be between you and me
Make it a true confession
In the end, you will be taught a lesson
Bless me, Mistress for I have sinned.
You started out perfect; continue, begin.
I have thoughts
Wants
Desires
impurity it's going to throw me in the fire
You'll burn with what I give you tonight
kneel before me
enjoy my bite
Before we begin, I deserve a token
open my robe and lean in
place a kiss for words that were spoken
You did that so beautifully
The strap that I picked out is more for me
than you, you see
count it out, and when we're done
I will allow absolution to come
ONE
Author's Note
My muse waited till the end of the day to appear and this is what happened.
Happy Friday people
Happy Friday people
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Re. Submissives Confession
15th Nov 2024 9:40pm
Your poem captures the intensity of deep intimacy through vivid imagery and a powerful sense of surrender. The interplay between confession and desire creates a compelling tension, drawing readers into a personal and secret space. It is a bold and thought-provoking piece that invites contemplation of the dynamics of power and intimacy. Great work!
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15th Nov 2024 10:27pm
Re. Submissives Confession
You’ve spoken
I’m listening
Then performing
Didn’t tame easily
But did cross over
History in the making
TWO, THREE, FOUR …..
BIG
RL AWARD
I’m listening
Then performing
Didn’t tame easily
But did cross over
History in the making
TWO, THREE, FOUR …..
BIG
RL AWARD
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16th Nov 2024 8:18pm
👏 👏 👏 excellent 👌 musing queen 👸 👏
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen 👸
Please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖 shalom queen 👸
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17th Nov 2024 11:27pm
You gave me a vision of a naughty Nun, a confession room, a form of sensual punishment in the best sort of way.
Sometimes people are naughty for the sake of the punishment, the irresistible sin that cannot be repented.
Nice. Xxx
Sometimes people are naughty for the sake of the punishment, the irresistible sin that cannot be repented.
Nice. Xxx
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17th Nov 2024 11:31pm
Naughty Nun, well I was wearing a robe, Dagger. Thank you for commenting;))
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24th Nov 2024 5:46pm
if I confess do I still get to burn?!?! so Im screwed either way aren't I?!?!?
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