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We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
That lasted about 2 drinks
Then innocence took a back seat
City Life is a meat grinder
You can tenderize and flame
Some like her well done
I took her medium with luscious pink
Bukowski was at the table in the corner
Hunter S. Thompson too
Wasted in the smokey dark heat
Comparing poetry and fright
I was at home with Sha Sha
Lou Reed stopped by to say hello
She didn't say much
Her English was a vacancy
We communicated in shy glances
Touched each other in places criminal
Yet this was the Scorpian Bar
Between Avenue B and C in New York City
Noone cared much for dignity
Sin was on the half shell
Lower East Side beer
Charming in a dime store way
You get me
Right ?
Then innocence took a back seat
City Life is a meat grinder
You can tenderize and flame
Some like her well done
I took her medium with luscious pink
Bukowski was at the table in the corner
Hunter S. Thompson too
Wasted in the smokey dark heat
Comparing poetry and fright
I was at home with Sha Sha
Lou Reed stopped by to say hello
She didn't say much
Her English was a vacancy
We communicated in shy glances
Touched each other in places criminal
Yet this was the Scorpian Bar
Between Avenue B and C in New York City
Noone cared much for dignity
Sin was on the half shell
Lower East Side beer
Charming in a dime store way
You get me
Right ?
Author's Note
Tales of my sin parade in New York City long ago ...
Painting by Poetspeak
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 6:54pm
Woo what an escapade it was. Dark, grimmy with hints of fire and smoke nice picture.;))
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Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 7:04pm
I love writing these gritty tales of bad behavior. The city was alive then before gentrification. Exhilarating and a little scary but we lived to tell ....
Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
Anonymous
15th Nov 2024 8:09pm
Gritty is good sometimes.
Excellent poem and painting. :)
Excellent poem and painting. :)
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Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:19pm
Thanks Tim
Some really wild times back then..
Easy to write and paint as it's burned in to my psyche..
Some really wild times back then..
Easy to write and paint as it's burned in to my psyche..
Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:10pm
A RIGHTEOUS vision of New York City at. Night my home town 🤗 yet it has been changed by the situations that are involved in creating chaos and drama and confusion and madness 😭 thanks to the immigrants 🤨🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:23pm
NYC is a victim of its own immensity but also wonderfully diverse because of it.
Immigrants come here to escape oppression in their own countries. I don't blame them, I blame the leadership of the places they are fleeing. It's complicated Stoney.
Thx for your viewpoint..
Immigrants come here to escape oppression in their own countries. I don't blame them, I blame the leadership of the places they are fleeing. It's complicated Stoney.
Thx for your viewpoint..
Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:36pm
I truly appreciate your thoughts on this subject matter for I blame the crooked mayor's and governments and Democrats for creating this world 🌎 for their own decisions that came from greed for something that came from a tree made into money 💰💰💰
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Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:54pm
I’m a life long Independent.
Lately there seems everyone is connected to evil and greed. Greed being the worst of the evil. It’s going to be a rocky road for quite a few years to come ..
Lately there seems everyone is connected to evil and greed. Greed being the worst of the evil. It’s going to be a rocky road for quite a few years to come ..
Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 9:27pm
Yes I would have to agree with that statement for there will always be good verse evil as long as money 💰💰👍 is involved in the mix of things pretending to life in the world 🌍🐺 WOLF BAY 🐺😠🤨
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Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:27pm
Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:34pm
You know it Mister
Boom Boom in my room..
Back then room by the hour
3 hour minimum
Boom Boom in my room..
Back then room by the hour
3 hour minimum
Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:30pm
I live on avenue b in a very distant city hehe maybe that's why we have so much in common :D
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Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 8:35pm
I'd like to know more about your city and Avenue B.....
Yes, we do well ASD ..
Yes, we do well ASD ..
Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
15th Nov 2024 9:36pm
“Sin was on the half shell”
Exquisite.
And that says it all.
Your painting is out of this world as well, PS. It’s like watching all that griminess slide off the canvas.
Exquisite.
And that says it all.
Your painting is out of this world as well, PS. It’s like watching all that griminess slide off the canvas.
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Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
16th Nov 2024 00:22am
I got a lot of street cred on that painting...
Wish I could remember how I did it ...
I recently gave it to my CEO nephew as a birthday present instead of the usual gift cards. He loved it too and hung it it his office at work...
Yeah, I love to live and write the grime ...
Thx M
😍
Wish I could remember how I did it ...
I recently gave it to my CEO nephew as a birthday present instead of the usual gift cards. He loved it too and hung it it his office at work...
Yeah, I love to live and write the grime ...
Thx M
😍
Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
16th Nov 2024 00:12am
Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
16th Nov 2024 00:25am
Thanks so much Willow !
I was in a dirty kind of write mood today.
I like telling stories of my wild years ...
I'd like some wild again..
Who wouldn't?
Appreciate your comment yo ..
I was in a dirty kind of write mood today.
I like telling stories of my wild years ...
I'd like some wild again..
Who wouldn't?
Appreciate your comment yo ..
Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
19th Nov 2024 00:46am
Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
19th Nov 2024 2:45am
Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
19th Nov 2024 8:54am
Dear PS,
I really enjoyed the raw and gritty as well as the artistic vibe throughout. The scene, the story and the characters you write about in this poem are edgy and boundary pushers. Big Dig. Excellent write and the accompanying painting is fab!
H🌷
I really enjoyed the raw and gritty as well as the artistic vibe throughout. The scene, the story and the characters you write about in this poem are edgy and boundary pushers. Big Dig. Excellent write and the accompanying painting is fab!
H🌷
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Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
Dear H,
Sometimes I get goosebumps reading a spectacular comment like yours ...
This was a fun one to write.
The city was different back then.
Or we were in our non-geriatric years so you know what I mean.
Anything was possible and sometimes was ..
Thank you so much Honoria 💓
You honored me.
I love that
Stay tuned
Xx
Sometimes I get goosebumps reading a spectacular comment like yours ...
This was a fun one to write.
The city was different back then.
Or we were in our non-geriatric years so you know what I mean.
Anything was possible and sometimes was ..
Thank you so much Honoria 💓
You honored me.
I love that
Stay tuned
Xx
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19th Nov 2024 6:58pm
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22nd Nov 2024 1:26am
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22nd Nov 2024 1:39am
Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
24th Nov 2024 5:08pm
Was easily placed at the scene here with your excellent words. Conscience was just about observed too or maybe not. It must have felt very liberating for two drinks at least, lol. What's not to like? Enjoyed. 😊
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Re: Re. We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
24th Nov 2024 5:46pm
I really like writing about this time period.
You'd like Sha Sha. She makes a man feel good and she's very accommodating...
Thanks Bill
You'd like Sha Sha. She makes a man feel good and she's very accommodating...
Thanks Bill