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Ode To Smelly Rhymes
I've got poems in my laundry
Amongst my smelly socks
To I and all of sundry
They are a load of crock
Some are kinda shitty
Some I use for fuel
Some are hard and gritty
Some get over-ruled
I guess there are a few
That really hit the spot
Others make you spew
Left to die and rot
They'll never see the light
They don't give off good vibes
From me to you they're shite
My ode to smelly rhymes
Amongst my smelly socks
To I and all of sundry
They are a load of crock
Some are kinda shitty
Some I use for fuel
Some are hard and gritty
Some get over-ruled
I guess there are a few
That really hit the spot
Others make you spew
Left to die and rot
They'll never see the light
They don't give off good vibes
From me to you they're shite
My ode to smelly rhymes
Author's Note
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Traveling Wilburys - Cool Dry Place
Traveling Wilburys - Cool Dry Place
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Re. Ode To Smelly Rhymes
Anonymous
15th Nov 2024 11:52am
I've got lots of them hanging around. lol
Great rhyming, Pete.
Great rhyming, Pete.
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15th Nov 2024 10:32pm
Hah! I have an abso-freaking-lately not folder for some of the stuff I write. This brought smiles
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Re. Ode To Smelly Rhymes
16th Nov 2024 10:14am
Brilliantly written, Pete. Great taste in music, brother. Can't go wrong with the Wilburys. Liked this a lot. Appreciate you.
DL
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16th Nov 2024 12:12pm
They should add a category "humor" here, you would rock that category.
...I don't think anyone can put smelly socks in a write and get it away with it :-)
Also: love that song, it fits your piece.
...I don't think anyone can put smelly socks in a write and get it away with it :-)
Also: love that song, it fits your piece.
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