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Venomous Kiss Of His Fists
In lieu of a kiss, he used his fist
Felt that she dissed and he got pissed
Used his palms in lieu of a charm
Strangled, she couldn't raise her arms
Recited Psalms then said goodbye
Reached the finale of blackened eyes
She chose the wrong guy for a mate
Hindsight's 20/20; a twisted fate
Felt that she dissed and he got pissed
Used his palms in lieu of a charm
Strangled, she couldn't raise her arms
Recited Psalms then said goodbye
Reached the finale of blackened eyes
She chose the wrong guy for a mate
Hindsight's 20/20; a twisted fate
Published 12th Nov 2024
Author's Note
For the "In lieu of a kiss" comp.
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12th Nov 2024 6:01am
12th Nov 2024 7:44am
16th Nov 2024 1:50am
Definitely understood the assignment. Excellent ink, Sir Damon. Unfortunately, for many, this is a reality that does not go away at the stroke of a pen
16th Nov 2024 5:55pm
I forget where I heard "In the end you think about the beginning"...just like hindsight being 20/20.
Strong write sir.
Good luck in the comp.
Strong write sir.
Good luck in the comp.
