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Wait
Sub
I need him to believe me
I want this
I need this
I started to kneel, and he grabbed my throat from behind
He squeezes tight but not tight enough
I need more and whimper
Dom
I'm making her suffer
She says she wants to serve me
Wants me to DOMINATE her
But she's a rookie
Doesn't really know what that means
So I let her pine and wait
Long for something bigger than herself
I'm a sadist
I enjoy her suffering
She can wait
Till her lust is at a breaking point
Then and only then
Will I give her a taste
Then
She can wait some more...
Sub
Is he not pleased?
Please
It slipped out before I could stop myself
He walked in front of me
That was when I knew
With absolute certainty
Not only did I strike the match
I am the cause of the inferno that is going to be unleashed
I want to burn
Dom
Please???
She spoke without permission
Since she feels the need to speak
I will give her what I want to hear
Since you cannot stay silent, say this,
if you do not say it the way I want, then…
I want to hurt you, and I want you to want that
Say it back to me
My blood has amped up a notch
Make the mistake
Sub
You want to hurt me, and I want you to hurt me
I can feel liquid heat pool between my legs
I want his hands on me
Why is he torturing me
I need him to believe me
I want this
I need this
I started to kneel, and he grabbed my throat from behind
He squeezes tight but not tight enough
I need more and whimper
Dom
I'm making her suffer
She says she wants to serve me
Wants me to DOMINATE her
But she's a rookie
Doesn't really know what that means
So I let her pine and wait
Long for something bigger than herself
I'm a sadist
I enjoy her suffering
She can wait
Till her lust is at a breaking point
Then and only then
Will I give her a taste
Then
She can wait some more...
Sub
Is he not pleased?
Please
It slipped out before I could stop myself
He walked in front of me
That was when I knew
With absolute certainty
Not only did I strike the match
I am the cause of the inferno that is going to be unleashed
I want to burn
Dom
Please???
She spoke without permission
Since she feels the need to speak
I will give her what I want to hear
Since you cannot stay silent, say this,
if you do not say it the way I want, then…
I want to hurt you, and I want you to want that
Say it back to me
My blood has amped up a notch
Make the mistake
Sub
You want to hurt me, and I want you to hurt me
I can feel liquid heat pool between my legs
I want his hands on me
Why is he torturing me
Author's Note
I had to decide if I wanted to take this to the next step and I decided to let your imagination take over.
Context she wants to be punished, needs to be so she can just release all the pent-up emotions
Context she wants to be punished, needs to be so she can just release all the pent-up emotions
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Re. Wait
12th Nov 2024 1:16am
He seems like a reasonable guy, lol, but it would be dangerous of me to speculate whether or not he does requests because after all, I am a novice too! 😊
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12th Nov 2024 1:21am
Hmm, what would you want to put her through, I wonder? Thank you for commenting, Billy
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12th Nov 2024 2:48am
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Re. Wait
12th Nov 2024 10:43am
Another hot, stimulating write Fia. Wonderfully executed in delivery and dialog. XXX
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12th Nov 2024 12:12pm
Re. Wait
12th Nov 2024 11:37am
Intriguing interplay between these two.
Master and subject. Each with needs.
Who are they and how did they find each other is the question?
Good write Fia
BIG LIKE
Master and subject. Each with needs.
Who are they and how did they find each other is the question?
Good write Fia
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. Wait
12th Nov 2024 12:14pm
I will think about that and will decide if I will reveal...
I will say this is definitely not a 50 Shades of Grey couple at all
I will say this is definitely not a 50 Shades of Grey couple at all
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12th Nov 2024 12:31pm
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Re. Wait
12th Nov 2024 5:10pm
He put his hands upon your legs
Grabbed them hard and spread them wide
Drove his hard cock in you
Until it bottomed out inside
Then he kept on pushing
Stretching all until it hurt
You screamed, "That's what I wanted!!"
As your cunt began to squirt.......
Grabbed them hard and spread them wide
Drove his hard cock in you
Until it bottomed out inside
Then he kept on pushing
Stretching all until it hurt
You screamed, "That's what I wanted!!"
As your cunt began to squirt.......
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12th Nov 2024 5:20pm
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12th Nov 2024 5:23pm
Re. Wait
13th Nov 2024 2:25pm
Greatwrite , I can imagine the scenes mmm, thank you for sharing your poem with us
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13th Nov 2024 3:17pm
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13th Nov 2024 11:07pm
👏 👏 👏 absolutely illicit and sexually stimulating ans sensual fia:)) fire 🔥 😍 I'm sure this will captive your audience queen 👸!!
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace and blessings always 🙏 shalom
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok 👌 peace and blessings always 🙏 shalom
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13th Nov 2024 11:16pm
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Re. Wait
17th Nov 2024 11:54pm
Sex is always at its best when we lose the human and embrace the animal within.
I can almost hear David Attenborough ready to narrate what happens next.
Nature is brutal, but sometimes, that's the best part of it.
Xxx
I can almost hear David Attenborough ready to narrate what happens next.
Nature is brutal, but sometimes, that's the best part of it.
Xxx
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18th Nov 2024 00:11am