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a deo... mixture of pain n pleasure
i wanna
become
your exotic erotic deo...
i wanna
takes you
on a sensory journey...
i wanna
drench your
chest by my fragrance...
i wanna
spread through
your neck to your navel...
i wanna
engulf all
your saltiness sweetly...
i wanna
fill your mind
with tender longing...
please
give me a space
inside your under wear too...
i wanna
taste
your silent secrets...
become
your exotic erotic deo...
i wanna
takes you
on a sensory journey...
i wanna
drench your
chest by my fragrance...
i wanna
spread through
your neck to your navel...
i wanna
engulf all
your saltiness sweetly...
i wanna
fill your mind
with tender longing...
please
give me a space
inside your under wear too...
i wanna
taste
your silent secrets...
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Re. a deo... mixture of pain n pleasure
11th Nov 2024 5:19pm
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11th Nov 2024 5:21pm
Re. a deo... mixture of pain n pleasure
Agree with Fianaturie, it's hot. This verse is the height of naughty raunchy:
please
give me a space
inside your under wear too...[mind boggles to visualise the fitting in together!]
"your exotic erotic deo..." by the last word do you mean god/goddess?
please
give me a space
inside your under wear too...[mind boggles to visualise the fitting in together!]
"your exotic erotic deo..." by the last word do you mean god/goddess?
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Re: Re. a deo... mixture of pain n pleasure
12th Nov 2024 3:04am
Re: Re. a deo... mixture of pain n pleasure
12th Nov 2024 5:53am
Now the poem makes total sense. Portraying yourself as a deodorant for your love to wear.
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12th Nov 2024 8:12am
Re: Re. a deo... mixture of pain n pleasure
12th Nov 2024 6:09pm
It would be funny (with its undertones of sadism/masochism) if some manufacturer thought of bringing out a deodorant brand named 'Pain and Pleasure' LOL.
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Re: Re. a deo... mixture of pain n pleasure
12th Nov 2024 6:22pm
well nothing is written here about deo's name nor it is mentioned... juz emotions are taken here as consideration... n thank you very much as for comment.. Take care
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