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Alcoholic Haiku

two shots of vodka
from underneath the iceberg
love's freezing my friend
PAR
Written by PAR (PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
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Re. Alcoholic Haiku
1st Nov 2024 11:40am
Love this. Clever and nicely said.
Vision_of_insanity
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(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
1st Nov 2024 11:48am
A toast to lovers and addictions...
PAR
Re: Re. Alcoholic Haiku
1st Nov 2024 12:01pm
Always & forever!
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. Alcoholic Haiku
1st Nov 2024 6:15pm
The freezing is a delicious way to enjoy the hardness of alcohol...makes it last. LHK
TheOralizer
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(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
1st Nov 2024 6:51pm
Vodka rules. HKL
PAR
Re. Alcoholic Haiku
(Damian DeadLove)
2nd Nov 2024 2:03am
Great write, PAR. Appreciate you.

DL
DamianDeadLove
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Re: Re. Alcoholic Haiku
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
2nd Nov 2024 8:56am
Thanks!
PAR
Re. Alcoholic Haiku
3rd Nov 2024 9:28am
your good at these haiku
AspergerPoet56
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(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
3rd Nov 2024 10:28am
🙏🙏🙏 Thanks.
PAR

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