The Birth of a Scream

I like this, I like the way it sounds to.
an enjoyable horror poem

Thanks so very much

Halloween Gold!

Thanks so much

It has you on the edge of your seat when you read this. Great work
Regards James

Oh thank you, I love to hear that. I thought it wasn't scary enough, lol
Appreciate you checking out.

hello beautiful Debbie I can feel it in my belly the need to scream so spooky and great ❤️

Aww. Thanks so much. I could use a good scream myself.
Thanks for RL.

This was fucking cool. I liked the flow and the use of alliteration in this ♡
Happy Halloween!

Thank you so much for checking out.
Hope you had a happy Halloween.

Brilliantly written, Debbie. Into the list it goes. Great Halloween ink. Appreciate you.

DL

Thanks so much, appreciate you too!

time for scary stories

Hope I scared you 😊
Thanks for checking out.

I love the buildup to the simple transition at the end, to one particular phrase, that has so much condensed meaning.  It's almost like a prelude or prequel to some kind of frightening event about to happen.  The definitive terms you use tend to be very observant in literate characterization and conveyed a literal context.  The visual side of things you used to piece together your poem. are also outstanding in continual direction   You use both diction and visual quite well.  A good job at capturing both styles and techniques of writing, heh.  Where you interject visual disposition and metaphor really bring to life the momentum towards the scream, especially when I look at that picture!  You carry in transition the eerie mood and emotion in a unique, harmonic balance, that further defines itself, as it unravels.  Thanks for sharing.  This seemed like a new twist on things from you, in some ways.  Looking forward to reading from you again!

Enormous thanks for your feedback. I learn alot about my writing.
It's nice to hear I'm doing something right. I don't realize I'm doing the things
you describe. I'm glad you liked it, it was fun to write.
Thanks again!!!!

This took me back....whew!!!

I hope that's a good thing, lol.
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Outstanding work here Debbie. Nicely executed a fun, dark poem you wrote. Hope you had a scary Halloween!

Thank you very much!

And that’s exactly how it is. Girl, you have a gift.

Aww thank you for saying that. 💜