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A Doll's Wish
The empty of my life found a
fullness in the mystery of a boy's touch.
While helping me with math, I noticed Jason
smiling at the doll on my bed.
I’d slept with Julie as a child and my favorite doll
still acted as the sentinel of my bedroom
sixteen years after my birth.
When math was done, the same lips
that had kissed Julie so many nights
found Jason’s lips warm with life.
I smiled as Julie looked on, wondering if
dolls have dreams for those who love them.
Moments later, I looked carefully at Julie’s longing eyes
and then covered Jason’s hardened penis with my mouth.
fullness in the mystery of a boy's touch.
While helping me with math, I noticed Jason
smiling at the doll on my bed.
I’d slept with Julie as a child and my favorite doll
still acted as the sentinel of my bedroom
sixteen years after my birth.
When math was done, the same lips
that had kissed Julie so many nights
found Jason’s lips warm with life.
I smiled as Julie looked on, wondering if
dolls have dreams for those who love them.
Moments later, I looked carefully at Julie’s longing eyes
and then covered Jason’s hardened penis with my mouth.
Written by
Nizana
(Lauryn)
Published 25th Oct 2024
| Edited 17th Dec 2024
Author's Note
A few years ago mother wrote a poem imagining an event in my bedroom. This morning I revisited the memory and felt the blunt rawness of the desire I felt at that age.
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Re. A Doll's Wish
Sometimes I get lost in my own memories when I read your work, Lauryn.
This is beautiful in it's honesty and innocence. I do believe there's innocence here when some may not.
Thank you for posting. You're very talented.
Beautiful photo, btw.
This is beautiful in it's honesty and innocence. I do believe there's innocence here when some may not.
Thank you for posting. You're very talented.
Beautiful photo, btw.
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Re. A Doll's Wish
25th Oct 2024 2:03pm
Dear Nizana,
I used to read you mom's stories and poem she was a great poetess and writer of romance, erotic and sensuality. I have not seen her writings anymore. How is she doing? She was the first person to communicate. She is the one who encouraged me to write erotic poem.
I love your writing too. You are reflection of your mother. You really retrospected the moment of past in a beautiful way. You are as talented as you mom. I love you both dearly.
Hug.and kisses
KS
I used to read you mom's stories and poem she was a great poetess and writer of romance, erotic and sensuality. I have not seen her writings anymore. How is she doing? She was the first person to communicate. She is the one who encouraged me to write erotic poem.
I love your writing too. You are reflection of your mother. You really retrospected the moment of past in a beautiful way. You are as talented as you mom. I love you both dearly.
Hug.and kisses
KS
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25th Oct 2024 3:31pm
Thank you for your words about mother. I'm sorry to tell you this way but mother died May 2, 2023. I'll put a ink to her obituary. When she died, I started writing in her place to keep her earlier writing available here.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/481590-mothers-obituary/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/481590-mothers-obituary/
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25th Oct 2024 3:32pm
Re: Re. A Doll's Wish
25th Oct 2024 5:29pm
Thanks for your message. I am sorry to hear about your Mom. She was great poetess. I hope that you her torch Bearer. Keep up the good work. I wish you best in your life. Please don't hesitate to contact me if I can be of any help.
Wirh love
KS
Wirh love
KS
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Re. A Doll's Wish
Imaginative piece as to whether dolls have memories. As another one who read your mother's works before yours, what you describe partly mirrors her first experience which was also with a boy teaching her math.
Agree with Her, beautiful photo.
Agree with Her, beautiful photo.
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Re: Re. A Doll's Wish
25th Oct 2024 8:03pm
Yes, we were both smitten by good math students. I'm still attracted to men with good math skills.
Re. A Doll's Wish
Anonymous
25th Oct 2024 11:03pm
Teaching math pays off after all. :)
Thinking about this, it's obvious you had a very strong bond between you and the doll. As you know, many consider dolls to be haunted, and some have even seen them move.
With that said, a person with a mind for haunted stories could look at this and suspect that more is going on that meets the eye. What if your bond with the doll was more than just a companion growing up, but a partner in casting a spell on Jason. Therefore making him weak to your desires.
Of course in saying that, I realize no one needs to put a spell on any man to make him weak in your presence. With your beauty they're probably open to anything you want...especially a blow job. WHOOOOOOOOOWEEEEEEE. :))
I realize this comment is a complete waste of time, but I figured I go for it anyway.
Have a nice day
Thinking about this, it's obvious you had a very strong bond between you and the doll. As you know, many consider dolls to be haunted, and some have even seen them move.
With that said, a person with a mind for haunted stories could look at this and suspect that more is going on that meets the eye. What if your bond with the doll was more than just a companion growing up, but a partner in casting a spell on Jason. Therefore making him weak to your desires.
Of course in saying that, I realize no one needs to put a spell on any man to make him weak in your presence. With your beauty they're probably open to anything you want...especially a blow job. WHOOOOOOOOOWEEEEEEE. :))
I realize this comment is a complete waste of time, but I figured I go for it anyway.
Have a nice day
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26th Oct 2024 11:48am
Not a waste of time. In fact, you might have given me a story idea. Thank you for commenting.
Re. A Doll's Wish
26th Oct 2024 2:36pm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j9Vit2vq22M
Reminded me of this song from Toy Story 2. Every time I watch this it busts me up. Wierd but true. I've always been intrigued with the inclinations we have as adults for projecting persona on to childhood toys... not unlike what we used to do without even thinking about it. I suppose it reaches back and down deep into what, if anything, remains of us that has not yet been domesticated out of believing. Another piece is Gabriel Faure's Dolly Suite. I love the layers to this, and the cohesiveness it creates in the transition from innocence to carnal knowledge.
Reminded me of this song from Toy Story 2. Every time I watch this it busts me up. Wierd but true. I've always been intrigued with the inclinations we have as adults for projecting persona on to childhood toys... not unlike what we used to do without even thinking about it. I suppose it reaches back and down deep into what, if anything, remains of us that has not yet been domesticated out of believing. Another piece is Gabriel Faure's Dolly Suite. I love the layers to this, and the cohesiveness it creates in the transition from innocence to carnal knowledge.
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Re. A Doll's Wish
2nd Nov 2024 2:36am