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Open Wide
Feel me up with your touch.
I want to feel you inside.
Open wide with compromise.
Give me your trust.
Envy all my flawless lies.
Let the heat carry us.
Imagine both of us divised.
We're both each other's crutch.
Take me as I am outside.
I'll love you with no fuss.
Don't let all of our haters divide.
Destroy them as we must.
Open wide, let me inside.
I know you're envious.
With diligence and reluctant pride,
Your quest is all but just.
You succeed as you hypnotize.
You follow and ambush.
You're always there by my side.
Being spoonfed as you thrust.
I want to feel you inside.
Open wide with compromise.
Give me your trust.
Envy all my flawless lies.
Let the heat carry us.
Imagine both of us divised.
We're both each other's crutch.
Take me as I am outside.
I'll love you with no fuss.
Don't let all of our haters divide.
Destroy them as we must.
Open wide, let me inside.
I know you're envious.
With diligence and reluctant pride,
Your quest is all but just.
You succeed as you hypnotize.
You follow and ambush.
You're always there by my side.
Being spoonfed as you thrust.
Written by
AfterSexDilemma
Published 23rd Oct 2024
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Re. Open Wide
23rd Oct 2024 8:09pm
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23rd Oct 2024 8:12pm
Re. Open Wide
23rd Oct 2024 8:59pm
This poetry looks like coming from a romantic heart, and its really beautiful as to the diction used
Best regards Hamid
Best regards Hamid
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24th Oct 2024 3:22am
Re. Open Wide
23rd Oct 2024 10:06pm
I love how "open wide" is carried through in this piece. Thank you for entering & good luck in the comp!
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24th Oct 2024 3:23am
Re. Open Wide
24th Oct 2024 3:27am
Phenomenal write, ASD. Best of luck in the competition. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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24th Oct 2024 3:33am
Re. Open Wide
24th Oct 2024 2:45pm
The words filled with aspiration, love and joy. .
Sweets crafted poem.
Love
KS
Sweets crafted poem.
Love
KS
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24th Oct 2024 4:49pm
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27th Oct 2024 1:56am
Re. Open Wide
27th Oct 2024 3:00am
Awesome. The line about being each other's crutch; Yup, but rarely said aloud between a couple. It is a simple glorious give and take.
Great write!
Great write!
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27th Oct 2024 3:38am
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Re. Open Wide
18th Nov 2024 2:27pm
the intensity of desire and the complexities of trust in a relationship. emphasizes the longing for emotional and physical intimacy. The interplay between love and external judgment adds depth, highlighting the strength found in unity against adversity. it's a bold expression of intimacy and mutual support.
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18th Nov 2024 2:40pm
Thank you! I love the detailed feedback. It is definitely a roller coaster ride