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F the Sun
Evil carcinogenic ball in the sky
I've a message for you: piss off and die
You promised to hide so we could have rain
yet on you blazed
bringing nothing but pain
Strut your radiant ass away and leave me alone
cool rainy days feel more like home
Your stupid solution
is to bring more pollution
well done i say
in the worst possible way
There's big trouble in the East
flooding and such
but would just one thunderstorm here
be asking too much?
In August I'm leaving
I know not where
but as long as it rains
I really don't care
I've a message for you: piss off and die
You promised to hide so we could have rain
yet on you blazed
bringing nothing but pain
Strut your radiant ass away and leave me alone
cool rainy days feel more like home
Your stupid solution
is to bring more pollution
well done i say
in the worst possible way
There's big trouble in the East
flooding and such
but would just one thunderstorm here
be asking too much?
In August I'm leaving
I know not where
but as long as it rains
I really don't care
Published 19th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Thunderstorms were predicted today. In the morning it was cloudy and promising, but once again, no. It's affecting me as badly as limited sun affects others. To those in Florida, Western NC, etc. I apologize if this rambling comes off as insensitive to your plight.
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19th Oct 2024 11:03am
21st Oct 2024 5:12am
Me tooooo. In the process of figuring out where to move next. Hopefully back to the NW.
21st Oct 2024 7:08am
19th Oct 2024 1:34pm
World is fucked.
No hoax
We did it and if evil gets elected it just speeds up the melanoma express death.
I’m a mostly cloudy kind of bloke so I get you Pink.
BIG
No hoax
We did it and if evil gets elected it just speeds up the melanoma express death.
I’m a mostly cloudy kind of bloke so I get you Pink.
BIG
20th Oct 2024 6:39pm
This is awsum! And also very comical, I can also relate when enough is enough. No more sun 🙌🏽🙌🏽
20th Oct 2024 8:24pm
Thank you! We had months of 100+ degrees every single day in Phoenix and it wore me out. Thanks for reading and commenting (and understanding).
22nd Oct 2024 1:41am
No worries, feel free to swing by my page and check some of my short stories in rhyme some time😎
21st Oct 2024 3:52am
We've had two hurricanes here in about a month's time. It sucked. But, my dumb ass stays in Florida, even though I am light sensitive ! Lol.
And your write isn't insensitive at all. Because actually we had the driest spring on record here, then had the wettest summer! So we begged for rain.. And then we got it!
Your write is pertinent to your plight, so no apologies!
It's a damn sure entertaining write, too, by the way. Hopefully your wish will come true, soon.
And your write isn't insensitive at all. Because actually we had the driest spring on record here, then had the wettest summer! So we begged for rain.. And then we got it!
Your write is pertinent to your plight, so no apologies!
It's a damn sure entertaining write, too, by the way. Hopefully your wish will come true, soon.
