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in the pale moments
the evening
wrapped itself
in the embrace of twilight,
the whispering
cool breeze
began to intoxicate the earth,
the night arrived
with red stars shining
like small diamonds,
the touch of the soft rays
of moonlight caused a shiver
in the velvety silence,
two hungry shadows
collided with each other,
the words closed
their mouths,
in a soft
and wild silence,
two bodies began to argue,
looking into
each other's eyes,
they began
to excite themselves,
two lips used
to call out someone's name,
they were now
licking two pearls
of white body,
the throbbing tool
wanted to be rubbed,
wanted to be emptied,
the wonderful sex begins,
and every mark
on the body makes a promise,
finally, in the lap of night,
the sky of desires
was colored with sighs
and a night woven
in tears of satisfaction
came to an end...
wrapped itself
in the embrace of twilight,
the whispering
cool breeze
began to intoxicate the earth,
the night arrived
with red stars shining
like small diamonds,
the touch of the soft rays
of moonlight caused a shiver
in the velvety silence,
two hungry shadows
collided with each other,
the words closed
their mouths,
in a soft
and wild silence,
two bodies began to argue,
looking into
each other's eyes,
they began
to excite themselves,
two lips used
to call out someone's name,
they were now
licking two pearls
of white body,
the throbbing tool
wanted to be rubbed,
wanted to be emptied,
the wonderful sex begins,
and every mark
on the body makes a promise,
finally, in the lap of night,
the sky of desires
was colored with sighs
and a night woven
in tears of satisfaction
came to an end...
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Re. in the pale moments
16th Oct 2024 12:02pm
You made a pale moment vibrant in the way only you can, dimpy.
This was exquisite.
This was exquisite.
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16th Oct 2024 6:55pm
Favourite chunk:
in a soft
and wild silence,
two bodies began to argue, [in passion]
looking into
each other's eyes,
they began
to excite themselves,
two lips used
to call out someone's name,
in a soft
and wild silence,
two bodies began to argue, [in passion]
looking into
each other's eyes,
they began
to excite themselves,
two lips used
to call out someone's name,
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18th Oct 2024 5:52pm
you read and reacted a second time, it's like a reward to me artist... Thank you from the bottom of my heart💖