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Mons Venus
O mound of Venus,
men from Mars
worship thou;
Plump and soft,
velvety like petals
of a rose
or wild
like when thorns crop up
Luscious like lychee-
this heavenly fruit
tempts him to dig in
his teeth
into the succulent flesh
so delish...
This triangular bulge-
Eden of earth,
every woman's fetish
to be fucked by mouth
Fondling daintily
licking slowly
kissing softly
biting ferociously
like a hungry boar;
till her soul rushes down south
swollen with ecstasy
pressured to bloom,
a rapturous rupture-
into millions of shrooms
Sweetly sensuous,
blatantly irresistible,
Mons Venus-
tool of seduction,
brings out the brute
in a famished man
men from Mars
worship thou;
Plump and soft,
velvety like petals
of a rose
or wild
like when thorns crop up
Luscious like lychee-
this heavenly fruit
tempts him to dig in
his teeth
into the succulent flesh
so delish...
This triangular bulge-
Eden of earth,
every woman's fetish
to be fucked by mouth
Fondling daintily
licking slowly
kissing softly
biting ferociously
like a hungry boar;
till her soul rushes down south
swollen with ecstasy
pressured to bloom,
a rapturous rupture-
into millions of shrooms
Sweetly sensuous,
blatantly irresistible,
Mons Venus-
tool of seduction,
brings out the brute
in a famished man
Published 9th Oct 2024
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9th Oct 2024 2:03pm
9th Oct 2024 2:33pm
Thank you so much ,dear poetess for the wonderful review and the RL add...I'm truly honoured 🌹❤️
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9th Oct 2024 6:33pm
Hoi hoi
Lovely write. And the end is the cherry on the cake.
And I would love to hear you sing.
Thank you for posting.
Kind regards, Gus
Lovely write. And the end is the cherry on the cake.
And I would love to hear you sing.
Thank you for posting.
Kind regards, Gus
9th Oct 2024 6:39pm
Thanks a lot for a great review, dear poet❤️
But ...that's not my pic... it's Shakira's ..a popular Columbian singer 😊
But ...that's not my pic... it's Shakira's ..a popular Columbian singer 😊
9th Oct 2024 7:19pm
This could come out of the era of Shakespeare (who lived in England 1564-1616) or his many poetic contemporaries like John Donne. Favourite lines, for the juxtaposition of Mars and Venus:
O mound of Venus,
men from Mars
worship thou; [in Shakespeare's day when no idea of ET aliens existed 'men from Mars' could mean be soldiers who patronised the brothels or made sport among the local women where they were stationed]
O mound of Venus,
men from Mars
worship thou; [in Shakespeare's day when no idea of ET aliens existed 'men from Mars' could mean be soldiers who patronised the brothels or made sport among the local women where they were stationed]
That's interesting.....
Well, this idea came from the title of the book"men are from Mars and women from Venus"(though I have never read the book)
....plus ,we all know what mound of Venus or mons Venus is...it's the pubic area of women.
N it's named after Venus coz Venus is the Roman goddess of love and beauty
So , that's how I crafted this piece
Thank you so much, dear Solomon for sharing your thoughts 🌹
Well, this idea came from the title of the book"men are from Mars and women from Venus"(though I have never read the book)
....plus ,we all know what mound of Venus or mons Venus is...it's the pubic area of women.
N it's named after Venus coz Venus is the Roman goddess of love and beauty
So , that's how I crafted this piece
Thank you so much, dear Solomon for sharing your thoughts 🌹
10th Oct 2024 6:09am
I did suspect the Mars and Venus book may have inspired your words, and read this aware it is about the mound of Venus.
10th Oct 2024 6:18am
10th Oct 2024 5:14pm
If you haven't read the book don't bother - the author's qualifications have been called into question.
10th Oct 2024 5:27pm
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10th Oct 2024 6:34am
Thank you graciously,dear poet for your wonderful n kind review. Very much appreciate it ❤️
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