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Where I belong
I find my lil corner
in your cute axilla,
when I feel so weary
of this world
A warm and safe haven,
your armpit-a temptatious heaven
beckons me
for some mushy moments
I love to nuzzle my nose
against your soft skin;
your musky perfume
fills up my soul
A comfort zone
where I belong
away from my
struggles and pain
of this life mundane
My face embedded
in your cushiony cavern
as I lie over you
and your arms around me
this is what I call my home...
in your cute axilla,
when I feel so weary
of this world
A warm and safe haven,
your armpit-a temptatious heaven
beckons me
for some mushy moments
I love to nuzzle my nose
against your soft skin;
your musky perfume
fills up my soul
A comfort zone
where I belong
away from my
struggles and pain
of this life mundane
My face embedded
in your cushiony cavern
as I lie over you
and your arms around me
this is what I call my home...
Author's Note
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Re. Where I belong
4th Oct 2024 3:37pm
Home 🏠 is that comfy zone where we feel safe within those arms of warmth like a burning fire 🔥🔥🔥
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Re: Re. Where I belong
4th Oct 2024 4:14pm
Thank you so much ,dear Stoney for your gracious presence on my page. Appreciate your thoughts❤️😊
Re: Re. Where I belong
4th Oct 2024 4:29pm
Respect DEAR POETESS AND FRIEND IT'S A NEED AND WANT OF A SPECIAL LIFE AND WORLD 🌍❤️ filled with the closeness of honor and respect 💯👍🤗
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4th Oct 2024 4:35pm
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Re. Where I belong
4th Oct 2024 6:28pm
It read cosily well enough to me - this poem proclaims 'Home is where YOU are".
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4th Oct 2024 7:37pm
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Re. Where I belong
6th Oct 2024 3:58am
This poem made me chuckle, for reasons you know "armpit". But at the same time I seriously enjoyed this write because it does show a safe comforting place to be, all joking aside. I never read a poem that mentioned it. very unique
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Re: Re. Where I belong
6th Oct 2024 10:46am
Thank you..
Yeah, many ppl won't like it coz of armpit...but then I feel what's the big deal, if can do oral, then this is more hygienic than that...but then everyone is entitled to their own liking or idiosyncrasies...😊
Thank you so much dearest for taking your precious time exploring my work. I'm so much grateful to you for it❤️
Yeah, many ppl won't like it coz of armpit...but then I feel what's the big deal, if can do oral, then this is more hygienic than that...but then everyone is entitled to their own liking or idiosyncrasies...😊
Thank you so much dearest for taking your precious time exploring my work. I'm so much grateful to you for it❤️
Re. Where I belong
14th Oct 2024 3:40pm
Dear D,
It is straight and simple.expression of your comfort and you express momentorily emotions unheaitstingly. I will tell you more inbox. Love. KS
It is straight and simple.expression of your comfort and you express momentorily emotions unheaitstingly. I will tell you more inbox. Love. KS
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